Take Me Away

[DelinQuent]

just a sample of it since im waiting for clearence from the producers to use the beat... which may not happen lol
and dont tell me i'm not lyrical, i'm not trying to be. i'm trying to make enjoyable music that people can relate to on a personal level.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/531781841b670bcf/
LYRICS-
hook-
i done felt rain, felt pain, take me awayyy/
hearts melting but you can save the dayyy/
watch the world fall apart, thangs aint the saame/
so save the day, and take me awayyy/

i feel the sky fall, but it's not a fairy tale/
see the picture painted there, is paradise not life/
a paradigm of color, so i swear on my own mother/
i will change the way, that the world looks at meee/
cause i feel betrayed, so i guarantee/
that if ya save the day, and take me away/
i could make you proud, i could make ya smile/
make the days worhwhile, so on that i vow/
if you would allow, could ya show me around/
take me away, and teach me the way/
what i mean to say, is i'll never escape/
unless ya save the day and take me away/

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

dude no hate but auto tune doesnt fit you at all lol
well flow got messed up 2 times.....ur breathing is hard as fuck...try to be more calm with it
umm...yeah...not my type of track....u needa suprise me again man stop droppin this kiddy shit

[DelinQuent]

lol thanks chris
the breathing thing isn't a problem, unless you mean actually hearing me breathe, thats cause i'm lazy. but the pauses in the flow are just how i write, i guess it's my style if that's what you'd like to call it lol

and no worries, there's some pure bred rap coming soon

[Call Me Pik]

beginning is mad jumbled the take me away in the background lil bit quieter

the hook is hott i like it

verse is better then the hook

good shyt

[randomghost]

the track is much better than the last one...autone was good hear..liked ur voice...gud stuff

[DelinQuent]

thanks guy

[DelinQuent]

next song has no autotune lol. it's called Wishing On A Dream

[Ka0t1c]

i didnt like the auto tune and the lyrics were good imo

[DelinQuent]

thanks for taking the time to listen

[Boston]

this is nothing special at all IMO, i heard better from you before, and since youve been dropping audio a lot i guess some people have high expectations from you. i personally heard better from you though so i know your capable of doing better. keep it up though

feed da new track asylum please
im pretty sure you'll like it ^_^
even you boi pik where ever hes at