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NEW STEVE SPAG SNEEK PEEK

Postby Steve Spag » Jan 9th, '09, 04:53

New song comin' out soon, this is just the un-mixed rough version.
Just feel like showin' it to you guys first before I up it to Myspace next week 'cause I'm a nice guy, lol.

Steve Spag - Game Over.mp3 - 2.88MB

Let me know what ya' think please.
:)

Got LOTS of NEW stuff coming soon.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SNEEK PEEK

Postby Requiem » Jan 9th, '09, 05:04

OH BOY, ALL CAPS!!!

lmao, good to hear some new shizz from you.

my take on it: the quality of the vocals are insane, and the flow is great. GREAT JOB man, rhymes are pretty darn good man, delivery was kinda off during the "flame thrower" line.
like the race over line, LMAO at the oprah line.
the hook's good man, no complaints.
verse 2 no complaints, and the multis were great man. great job, holy shit i love this song. especially the "wash out ur system line".
verse 3 not as good as 1 or 2, but the flow was good. just didn't think the lyrics were as good as the previous. but the "fans will eat you" line was cool.

overall- 8/10, good track man, can work on ur delivery some. u sound kinda bored when ur doing the outro, and the hook coulda had a little more emotion. otherwise i thought it was sick :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SNEEK PEEK

Postby James R. » Jan 9th, '09, 05:59

Well I love the beat. It's dope. Sounds like smtn the neptunes would push for a Jay Z track. I like the lyrics man. The flow is right on. The delivery is cool, but it's pretty mechanical in some spots and makes it boring, luckily whenever you get to that point you spice it up with a rhyme scheme change and a delivery switch. Good job. Definitely has some replay value. Very good job.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SNEEK PEEK

Postby Tornado » Jan 9th, '09, 13:19

sounds like you stole a Jay-Z beat, flow sounds like the No Miestro track and probably couldve changed it up a bit..other tahn that, good track
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SNEEK PEEK

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jan 9th, '09, 14:45

flow is smooth as fuck...sounds natural man...very good
flow stands out big time...lyrics are kool....but damn flow is flawless
mixing on your verse is nice man...no complains.....on the hook....lets say i wasnt feeling it....
good track :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SNEEK PEEK

Postby Steve Spag » Jan 9th, '09, 17:28

Thanks for the feed guys, glad you're diggin' the track. The beat was made by Shadowville Productions during the summer, and I've been addicted to it ever since. I've actually had this track done for a long ass time but was just waiting for the right time to release it.

Oh and the hook was done on the spot by another rapper from Windsor, Cube. He's on the same label as me, and we've done some work before if you remember.

So again, thanks for the feed, and keep it coming!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SNEEK PEEK

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 9th, '09, 17:48

that was nice, flow decimated and the beat was sick too
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SNEEK PEEK

Postby DelinQuent » Jan 9th, '09, 19:37

feeding as i listen

flow is good, rhyming is different, some rhymes i never heard lol. good shit man

after the break, same deal, good flow and good rhymes.

after another break, againnnn good flow and good rhyming.

outro was weak but idc about that, the rest was dope lyric and flow wise.

overall i didnt find it enjoyable because of the subject of it, but it was still some good shit :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SNEEK PEEK

Postby Solace » Jan 10th, '09, 01:04

Cool, i like the beat and your lyrics are definitely good. Your flow was on spot too :y: Really nice stuff, the hook wasnt horrible but it wasnt that great. The outro kinda made me laugh because of the way you said "hit that button replay, bump this song always all day, im steven spag" Keep the great shit up :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SNEEK PEEK

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 11th, '09, 15:57

DUDE the flow on this track as absofukinlutely wiked :b:
your voice has chnaged considerably since the last time i heard you, i must say its chnaged for the better :y: .lyrics were tite,
not much to complain/criticise about :flower:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SNEEK PEEK

Postby Boston » Jan 11th, '09, 16:03

ima still hold you up to that collab. lol but ima feed now:

the quality is good but meh. the flow is on point and i like the way you have the rhyme scheme in the first verse. the second verse is pretty good. not bad. idont like the chorus type thing (come on steve spag lets go) this has some replay value. i heard better from you though, keep it up

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SNEEK PEEK

Postby Steve Spag » Jan 11th, '09, 20:56

Thanks for the great feedback guys, it's greatly appreciated as I'm sure you already know.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SNEEK PEEK

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 11th, '09, 23:42

hmmm all tracks on the site work on zshare except this :confusion:

hmm lol... I know its my computer... I'll wait a few hours and then come back and try to chek again
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SNEEK PEEK

Postby Solace » Jan 12th, '09, 00:13

Here's a sendspace link to it then: http://www.sendspace.com/file/24cv60
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SNEEK PEEK

Postby Steve Spag » Jan 12th, '09, 02:26

^
Thanks for the feed buddy, always appreciated.
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