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"I'M BACK" New Emadyville

Postby Emadyville » Jan 6th, '09, 00:17

This is a diss track I made on this kid who decided to talk shit, my first real diss song I guess, if you don't include dissing a girl in love will and love will 2 lol. anyway since my comp broke i don't have lyrics sorry, feedback appreciated

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Re: "I'M BACK" New Emadyville

Postby Almostlity » Jan 6th, '09, 00:25

Great song man :D and VERY nice beat, ''5/5 Stars'' ;)

Can you upload this somewhere?
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Re: "I'M BACK" New Emadyville

Postby Emadyville » Jan 6th, '09, 00:30

Thanks for the feed yeah i will pm you with it by tomo sometime, thanks again.
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Re: "I'M BACK" New Emadyville

Postby Almostlity » Jan 6th, '09, 00:41

Ok, great :)
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Re: "I'M BACK" New Emadyville

Postby Jay-19 » Jan 6th, '09, 02:11

Man, it seems like you're improving with every damn line you spit bro!
This is some hard hitting shit man!
Really dig your flow and delivery, you should spit on these kind of beats a lot more.
Really really fits your style man.
Though I think your vocals are a little bit low compared to the beat, but I don't know. Might just be my shitty sounds system that's messing up.

Anyways, really heavy shit man! Good job! :y: :y:
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Re: "I'M BACK" New Emadyville

Postby Emadyville » Jan 6th, '09, 03:48

KillahGoat wrote:Man, it seems like you're improving with every damn line you spit bro!
This is some hard hitting shit man!
Really dig your flow and delivery, you should spit on these kind of beats a lot more.
Really really fits your style man.
Though I think your vocals are a little bit low compared to the beat, but I don't know. Might just be my shitty sounds system that's messing up.

Anyways, really heavy shit man! Good job! :y: :y:


thanks a lot for taking the time to listen and feed, glad you can see the improvement :y: :y:
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Re: "I'M BACK" New Emadyville

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 6th, '09, 10:36

i liked it man ,, it's very nice ,, the beat is nice and catchy , lyrics and rhymes were great also .. it was a good song .. actually , and flow and your delivery is sick as alywas .. i always liked your flow .. so overall it was a dope song , chorus was hot too.. so keep it up Emadyville .. 9/10 .. gd job ...
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Re: "I'M BACK" New Emadyville

Postby Emadyville » Jan 6th, '09, 17:19

Damn appreciate it man, thanks for taking the time :y:
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Re: "I'M BACK" New Emadyville

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 11th, '09, 18:08

dude your gettin hella hella better

your delivery is comming along which is what you were lacking

your flow is good

and lyrics are fantastic...

great song my man :y:
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Re: "I'M BACK" New Emadyville

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jan 11th, '09, 19:23

wow ...gotta agree on the delievery...u gettin better with that
:y: flow is pretty decent...catchy....
kinda liked the hook...good job man :y:
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Re: "I'M BACK" New Emadyville

Postby Emadyville » Jan 12th, '09, 03:24

Thanks a lot for feeding everyone
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Re: "I'M BACK" New Emadyville

Postby PAPYRUS » Jan 14th, '09, 16:49

this is real good!!, I like the diss man,

what I thinkg, is that you should tell us the story of why it came through first! :y: :sweating:
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Re: "I'M BACK" New Emadyville

Postby Emadyville » Jan 14th, '09, 20:56

PAPYRUS wrote:this is real good!!, I like the diss man,

what I thinkg, is that you should tell us the story of why it came through first! :y: :sweating:


This kid asked this girl I was kinda with "who is the black kid" because my names Daren, which apparently to him was a black name. He then said he wanted to play on our bball team like he was gunna show me up, and then she told me he is jealous of me. He was giving her shit for a week I guess so I said fuck it, and wrote this. The kid heard it to and then said he didn't have a problem with me haha apparently it got to him.
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Re: "I'M BACK" New Emadyville

Postby enjinn » Jan 16th, '09, 23:34

yo can you up this on zshare or something...i cant listen to it on myspace...sorry
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