Tornado- Walk Alone

[Tornado]

Yer, The Fourth Muthafucka in the Tourney finally posts his song, to prove i'm the best, Bar none . Anyway, here's the track, Yer the mixing sucks but w/e cos i hate mixing so


http://www.zshare.net/audio/54551291f0684dc9/

Title: Walk Alone
Artist: Tornado
Produced By: Tash8
Mixed by: Tornado


Lyrics

(1st Verse)

I don’t feel human/ no emotion moves him
No girl can woo him/ no blood can screw him
Am I disillusioned/ or is this the new him
Nobody knows/ is he full of ruing
Doesn’t show sadness/ doesn’t show remorse
They get a psychiatrist/ to get into the thoughts
Of a genocidal emcee/ who feelings are empty
He used to care plenty/ but that’s at an end see
Ask where his friends be/ but no bredda would get T
If they tried to/ Most of the time he ain’t friendly
Just a motionless stare/ all the passion disappear
Like a broken marriage/ love has gone out the air
And does he even care/ nobody ever knows
So he never ever shares/ so nobody ever knows
That’s the way he is/ that’s what he chose
He’s trapped in the middle/ he’s Tornado...

(Chorus) times 3
So I Walk Alone/ In My Own Zone
Why Is He Cold? / Nobody knows

So I Walk Alone…So I Walk Alone

(2nd Verse)
(from psychiatrist’s point of view)
Scarred from the past/ fucked in the brain
Damm Tornado/ no one feels your pain
You’re too isolated/ you don’t go say shit
Why are you this way? / why don’t you change kid
Let’s take a breather/ this is a new session
Breathe in and out/ And stop all the stressing
Search in deeper/ uncover hopes and dreams
Surrounded in ruins/ which is all I see
Here is cold and darkest/ no ray of ambition
It’s like a boulder/ stuck in this position
If I overcome it/ I can explore the chambers
If I don’t succeed/ then he’ll never change
But now I see the key/ to go open his mind
So finally he express/ what he feels in his mind
See it took a long time/ But were gonna know it
The truth of the matter/ I’ll go expose it

(Chorus)
(4 Bar Interlude)
(3rd Verse)
Convulsing manic/ life i can't stand it
i don't have no faith/ and the reason i'm branded
a villian portrayed/ is cos of the way
that i used to say/ shit, make people enraged
burning my bridges/ isolated, i'm livid
i don't feel at home/ oh yeah i ain't in it
i've been pushed to the limit/now all alone i'm living
alone in the world/ either sink or swimming
i don't need no love/ i don't need no tears
in a dead end job/ no hope of carrear
and when no passion/ nothing will ignite
then you know/ that something ain't right

[Jay-19]

If you cut down on that effect you're using (at least I hope you're using an effect, or else your quality might just be the worst I've ever heard), then I think this track actually could turn out pretty damn good. Because from what I can hear, seems like your flow is on point. The same goes for the delivery, from what I can hear, it fits the lyric really good.

If you could, I'd like to see a version without the effect, or at least a cut down on the effect.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yeah that effect (hollow) is overused...like way too much..makes it hard to understand
hook is very good...2nd verse starts amazing..flow-wise....but still hard to understand
5.8/10....

[GibbzyTrShady]

Lyrics were off tha chain i can relate to tha first verse majour on this man nice work!!!!!

[B.A.D.]

thank God you had the lyrics

I guess it was ok, lyrics were pretti good, beat choice is also very good

About the mixing, its a bad idea to say you don't care about that bcuz that is some basic thing of hip hop, the quality of the track, if you keep doing bad quality stuff people are not going to start respecting you

keep the good work up

[Robbie G]

To be honest I thought the beat was way too loud for your vocals. I couldn't hear a thing.

[Tash8]

do u have ur raw pellas? i would like to remix this.

[Steve Spag]

The quality's pretty messed, but from your lyrics and what I can hear it sounds pretty good. Your flow is pretty different, I like how it accencts some of your multi's, but the quality ruins it.

Keep it up man!

[Boston]

the way you mixed this is fucking weird as shit
i never heard of you but you have some talent, i mean if i was in the tourny you obviously wouldnt win ^_^

but seriously, i dont know why you chose to mix it like that. your lyrics are nice, simple sometimes but you use multies so its all good there to. the flow seems on for the most part. its nice, but at some parts it seemed force

keep it up
ill check ur next track

[Tornado]

thanks for the feed guys, and next time some1 else'llmix it for me
bump

btw my quality is gonna be better for my tape as i'ma record at my friends house so this is home studio quality

[AspirinE]

Like the beat.

i could hear some good rhythm in the rhyming but it doesnt help understing the quality.
Man it costs around 20$ to get average demo quality... i suggest an AKG mic and an audiocard that can record in 32bit.



But wat i understood i found enoyable..nice hook/

[Tash8]

Like the beat.

thanks you.

[randomghost]

hot beat quality suck big time man i bearly hear ur voice cant really judge the track if its good enuff... coz of the quality