Rain Matrix - Go Hard

[Rain Matrix]

Track- Go Hard
Artist- Rain Matrix
Album - Free Download
File Type - MP3
Link - I Go Hard.mp3 - 4.15MB

Lyrics

1st Verse - this rap doesn't mean much unless it has Substance
cuz lyrics without heart they just ain't about Nothing
it's time to leave my brain behind so I can finally Flow
I'm damn near Broke and my baby boy is four month's Old
please believe that the pain has taken firm hold of my Soul
inner demons of failure want me to fall but I am Opposed
when you listen to my rhymes your gonna hear my life Unfold
however I just remembered that I'm still in full Control
problems are like a cancer except you can't Slow the Growth
I'm confused about the feelings that I'm Supposed to Show
my instinct is telling me it might be okay to Go with Hope
before the man in the mirror is someone I no longer Know

2nd Verse - some people would kill to be happy for a Day
you gotta enjoy this life before it slips Away
that's exactly why I'm gonna keep this pen to the Page
these words are what keeps my personal troubles at Bay
I used to give in to my anger and release my Rage
now I've learned not to trip over every Mistake
knowledge comes with experience and wisdom with Age
when your depressed a walk outside feels like a Parade
all eyes on you cuz their waiting for you to Break
I say to hell with the haters they can watch me get Paid
their never gonna get to see me fall down flat on my Face
I know the choices I make turn into the life I have Made

3rd Verse - I could take a Switch Blade Six Way to your Big Frame
put your carcass on Display go ahead and trip when This Plays
you don't wanna fuck With Rain unless your prepared to feel His Pain
it's epic when I Spit Game cuz I Kick Fakes untill their Ribs Break
they can't talk shit if they Can't Breathe that's why none of them can Stand Me
know you shouldn't make me Angry cuz your swagger isn't this Uncanny
watch as I Fade into Time cuz I Stayed on my Grind
be afraid of this Mind the opposite of the bible you can't be Saved from these Lines

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

your flow was shaky in the 1st verse....u need to find the right amount of syllabies...
e.g. "inner demons of failure want me to fall but I am Opposed" <--> "....but im opposed"
or "these words are what keeps my personal troubles at Bay" <--> "....at the bay"
...
2nd verse is actually better flow-wise...
3rd verse has a dope opening line...if you could keep that flow it would be sick...but u slipped again...
so yeah 2nd verse is the best out of these...

umm..lyrics are always decent no argueing....quality is bad big time...but meh we all struggle with this..but also your pronouncation was kind of hard to understand...maybe cuz of the quality im not sure...keep workin

[Rain Matrix]

I made this song real quick trying to combat the stress of losing my fiance and baby boy
I'll try to get that quality up

[Slim Zaddy]

well its lyriyally great , and the rhymes are sick as usual , but your voice is'nt clear , the quality of the song is bad ,, and you seems like boring in the song ,, you got a nice voice ,, but by energetic and motivations you will sound great i guarantee , you need to feel what you sing ,and be exciting about what are you singing so it can sound great ,, , i'm not trying to be mean rain matrix .. but that's my real feed bro ,,

[gutawafang]

i think the quality... is not that good. lyrics wise,

thanks.