Semi Final #1. Steve Spag VS DelinQuent

[<Stiiccy>]

yes sticcy, i completely agree. i fucking HATE my own song. i'm not a cowboy, i dont ride on a steel horse lmfao

i didnt bite any concept from eminem or dre and i honestly have no idea what song you'd be speaking of.

i came up with this concept that i was an outlaw with a price on my head, but i didnt want to be an outlaw anymore. i was getting older and just wanted a simple life, then a man comes and tries to kill me to collect the bounty, but i can see he's nervous and won't be able to shoot me, so i shoot at him, missing on purpose so i dont kill him.

then, i leave. going back to see my mother but i die before i ever get the chance to see her. the end.

listen to the song Showdown by Dre Dre and Eminem

[DelinQuent]

will do

[James R.]

DQ

First thing about this is the beat sounds WAY different from Steves. I don’t like how it sounds on this song and it took me til the 3rd listen to realize they were the same lol.

Verse 1- The flow is cool, but the lyrics are very average. The delivery is cool but I feel like it could be a little harder hitting

Verse 2- Flow is still on point. Lyrics still average. More of the same really, save the cool fade out at the end.

Chorus thing was ok but annoying as hell. And the Yeehaww was just… no lol. I understand what you were tryna do, but I’d stay away from it lol.

Overall it was a cool track, but nothing really stood out in a good way. Some parts of your delivery you sounded very apathetic like you were bored or high. The flow stayed on though so good job for that part. I’ve heard your other stuff and you could have definitely come hard. 6/10



Steve Spizzle

Intro was alright, sounded weird though.

Verse 1- I thought your delivery switched a little in certain places and I wasn’t feeling it, but overall it was on point. Flow was right on. Lyrics were good as well. Nothing really wrong aside from the minor slips in your voice.

Verse 2- I feel as though you had more shining spots lyrically in this verse, but more bland spots as well. Still a good verse though. I enjoyed it a lot.

Verse 3- I like the singing you did in the beginning lol. This is by FAR the best verse to me. A lot of good lines and a couple ear catchers. Really liked this one. Good job. The flow and delivery were solid throughout. Good job.

Chorus- It’s cool. I like it. Nothing too over the top, but it fits very well

Overall I liked this a lot. I’ve heard better from you, but this is a track that you wouldn’t wanna skip on a mixtape. Good job man. After that 1st verse you held everything together well with flow and deliver. You got a lil singin voice I see lol but good job man. 7/10

I gotta give this to Steve Spag. He came harder I preferred how the beat sounded on his and his lyrics were better lyrics. Just an overall better song.

[DelinQuent]

thanks guys. looks like i'm losing this one, its already 3-0 with only 2 votes left... congrats steve. good job


but on another note, i thought this was a song competition, not a lyric competition. so i thought it was about making the best song that you'd rather hear more than once. guess i misunderstood lol.


again, great job steve, i personally enjoyed your track more than mine as well lol

[Steve Spag]

thanks guys. looks like i'm losing this one, its already 3-0 with only 2 votes left... congrats steve. good job


but on another note, i thought this was a song competition, not a lyric competition. so i thought it was about making the best song that you'd rather hear more than once. guess i misunderstood lol.


again, great job steve, i personally enjoyed your track more than mine as well lol

It is a song competition but lyrics play a overall aspect in song making.

Yee, it takes a lot of elements to make a song, lyrics is what i try to shine at the most though.

Glad you liked my track DQ and thanks to everyone else who voted aswell.

[mart85]

I know it's too late to vote, but I listened to both, and I just wanted to say I enjoyed them both and you did a great job you came up with different concepts so it was interesting to listen to

[Tash8]

Steve Spag: needs more emotion in your delivery... flow was good, though i felt it was too repetitive... lyrics were okay, nothing special, nothing stood out. the third verse, singing shit was awful, good thing it was only a bar... it's an okay song, i dont see anything special about it, it has absoluetly no replay value. I disliked all the "he" and "he's"... change it up a bit, you used it too much

Deliquent: you need more emotion too, ur whispering.. flow was good, though u fell off sometime.. the song was way too short, the storytelling was okay but it just felt random, there didn't seem to be a big plot or anything.. this also has nothing special about it, i dont see a reason to play this again either. ALSO, I couldn't understand you a lot of times either, work on your pronounciation.

btw this is not a great beat to use....

anyways, my vote goes to Steve Spag, I enjoyed it more.