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did you record your verse in one take? cuz damn the delievery sounds hard to keep up..but its a good one ...flow is nice man... love these rockish rap beats love it...
I love the beat. Is that how you sound? Cuz if thats smtn you do when you deliver your lines it must be hell on your throat. Lyrics were pretty good. Quality was great. It's an intro without a doubt, but it's not something that I'd skip.
Like people already said, that delivery must fuck your throat up worse than Corey Taylor drinking whiskey AND singing/screaming on stage. But damn man I like it, the delivery is perfect for this kind of beat, good job man, really! Lyrics are tight, not too complex, not too simple, perfect balance in my opinion.
Beat is cool just didn't like that snare, not my thing. Guitars were rocking though. Delivery wasn't natural at all, sounds forced big time. It's almost like your whispering but in a deep and gritty way. Hard to enjoy this track cause of the delivery, it sounds to fake for me, I'd personally re-record, just to make it alot more natural and proper sounding, cause your going for that rock star shit and your not doing it hardcore enough to get that delivery. Lyrics were alright and the slur worked I guess. But the delivery drags down the outcome of this song alot, specially since it's an intro. Needs work.
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