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Straight From The PA

Postby Call Me Pik » Feb 12th, '09, 00:19

Last edited by Call Me Pik on Feb 12th, '09, 23:43, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Straight From The PA

Postby slimsoxshady » Feb 12th, '09, 02:10

pretty sick for an intro to an album..i like it :y:
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Re: Straight From The PA

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Feb 12th, '09, 19:45

did you record your verse in one take? :sweating: cuz damn the delievery sounds hard to keep up..but its a good one :y: ...flow is nice man...
love these rockish rap beats :worship: love it...
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Re: Straight From The PA

Postby randomghost » Feb 12th, '09, 20:11

good stuff homie..nice intro...rockish beat :8) lovin it .good stuff :y:
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Re: Straight From The PA

Postby B.A.D. » Feb 12th, '09, 21:59

YO PIK!!!

can u get it on zshare, myspace ain't workin for me atm
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Re: Straight From The PA

Postby Call Me Pik » Feb 12th, '09, 23:43

thanks for all the love yall i def appreciate it cant wait till im finished wit this cd lol its droppin april 9th so u know

and axe i upped it to zshare for u :worship:
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Re: Straight From The PA

Postby Tash8 » Feb 13th, '09, 00:07

ur black? didn't know that...
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Re: Straight From The PA

Postby B.A.D. » Feb 13th, '09, 00:33

some rock shit, I like that

good choice for an intro beat, KA??

the rhymes are real nice, hahahaha, creative stuff, excelent quality, and delivery = :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:

defo lookin forward to that cd man :y:
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Re: Straight From The PA

Postby DelinQuent » Feb 13th, '09, 00:55

Tash8 wrote:ur black? didn't know that...


yes he's black.... he's been black since the day i met him lmfao
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Re: Straight From The PA

Postby James R. » Feb 13th, '09, 01:22

I love the beat. Is that how you sound? Cuz if thats smtn you do when you deliver your lines it must be hell on your throat. Lyrics were pretty good. Quality was great. It's an intro without a doubt, but it's not something that I'd skip.
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Re: Straight From The PA

Postby Jay-19 » Feb 13th, '09, 02:38

Yeah, this shit's hot man! :sweating:

Like people already said, that delivery must fuck your throat up worse than Corey Taylor drinking whiskey AND singing/screaming on stage.
But damn man I like it, the delivery is perfect for this kind of beat, good job man, really!
Lyrics are tight, not too complex, not too simple, perfect balance in my opinion. :y:

Looking forward to your album. :smoking:
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Re: Straight From The PA

Postby <Stiiccy> » Feb 13th, '09, 03:04

i like this alot man...this is a great intro...you sound like a clearer young jeezy
i really dont see any problem...it was really good man :y:
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Re: Straight From The PA

Postby Call Me Pik » Feb 13th, '09, 16:27

appreciate all the luv and hell yes this was hell on my throat :'(

but im glad yall enjoyed it hopefully the cd can compare outshine it
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Re: Straight From The PA

Postby Xray » Feb 13th, '09, 16:41

Honest feed.

Beat is cool just didn't like that snare, not my thing. Guitars were rocking though. Delivery wasn't natural at all, sounds forced big time. It's almost like your whispering but in a deep and gritty way. Hard to enjoy this track cause of the delivery, it sounds to fake for me, I'd personally re-record, just to make it alot more natural and proper sounding, cause your going for that rock star shit and your not doing it hardcore enough to get that delivery. Lyrics were alright and the slur worked I guess. But the delivery drags down the outcome of this song alot, specially since it's an intro. Needs work.
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Re: Straight From The PA

Postby enjinn » Feb 14th, '09, 09:17

damn this is some hype shit...like your delivery...beat is cool...flow on point...this is some good shit...i like
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