Vibe With Me

[MC Anonymous]

Well, I tried doing something new with my style so I made a club type song.
Hope you enjoy it. May be my last audio for a very long time.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/557765558cae2ca8/

Lyrics:

When I rhyme it brings tears to my eyes
these years going by, my fear's givin sides
your blind in the eyes, my rhymes are inside
my lines already tried, to come on and ride
when you hear my voice, you have a choice
to laugh and point, or grab you a joint
roll up the blunt, smoke your pain away
the rain gives way, to your soul today
anything to give, so you can live and die
when you wonder why, sittin' down to vibe
then you drown you eyes, let your feet just ride
to the beat inside, where the heat resides
my voice erase pain, it displace shame
now vibe to my name, it's everything to gain
just vibe with me now, you already know how
dance along with the crowd, as the beat bangs loud

Come along with me and dance to the beat
come along with me, just dance with ya feet
erase all the pain, just vibe with me now
erase all your shame, just ride with the crowd x2

some hypnotic, chronic, dancin' with a girl
just glancin' at her pearls, man it's just a whirl
party lights flashin', camrea lights gashin'
askin' what happened, in a drunken fasion
speakers bumpin, the rhyme is thumpin'
heart beat's jumpin, adrenaline pumpin
rhythm's enticing, quicker then lightning
your feet starts fighting, the beat like writing
with my rhyming, I make your body move
it makes you really groove, flow's is just so smooth
enjoyment with rhythm, drinkin a serum
composed of alchohol, that will really clear em
drunk on the floor, their wanting some more
damn my jaw is sore, it's why I'm living for
hold on to the rhyme, until the end of time
rhythm bends ya spine, with every spoken line.

Come along with me and dance to the beat
come along with me, just dance with ya feet
erase all the pain, just vibe with me now
erase all your shame, just ride with the crowd x2

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

hmm....at least you got your voice under control...still could be a lil more smoother
flow was okay(still rushed at some points),catchy,amusing...lol
lyrics...hmm you defo dumbed it down....just add 10% more complexity again then you good

[MC Anonymous]

hmm....at least you got your voice under control...still could be a lil more smoother
flow was okay(still rushed at some points),catchy,amusing...lol
lyrics...hmm you defo dumbed it down....just add 10% more complexity again then you good

Thanks for the feed bro, appreciated.

[DelinQuent]

i like how you kept it down to earth on the first verse. good flow and good lyrics, but delivery is lacking.

hook is eh, it has a good catchy flow but i couldnt get into it

second verse didnt really match the first verse's concept. but it still had a good flow to it and decent rhyming.

overall 6/10 due to clashing concepts between first and second verse. but it still wasnt bad to listen to keep improving

[gutawafang]

Not bad. Honestly, I think your voice is not for this kind of songs. No offense. But yeah, your delivery was on and off, as Chris said, rushed at some points.

Nevertheless, lyrics perfect for this kind of song. And I give it a five. Yeah.

[Solace]

it was okay, your delivery was bad for this, but it wasn't horrible. I didn't really like the re-verb effect either. I just cant vibe with you on this. Your flow was good tho man. Good lyrics for this matter too dude. Eh track, didnt really like it but it wasnt horrible.

[B.A.D.]

the beat choice isn't good for this type of tracks

you got good flow, that something good.. congrats on that, but you gotta make it even better for the hook... also the bad quality affects a lot, hmm you should really fix it... about your voice, well I'm not sure, I don't like it at all for rapping... hmm, you still gotta practice a lot, work more on the delivery, try to ask someone to mix a track for you, get better beat choices, and improve the flow

[Boston]

your flow is basic but it is a MASSIVE improvement from last time i heard you. you can flow now ha. the delivery just seems boring, but it does beat the screaming type thing you use to do haha. but sounds like your reading a lot and that you are bored. lyrics are good tho, like always from you. hook is straight, keep doing what you do, practice will make ya better.
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[MC Anonymous]

Thanks guys for the great feed I'll try my hardest to do better....

[Xray]

Your voice is EXACTLY like Emadyville it amazes me how much people sound alike on tr O_O you, rain matrix, emadyville on one track and I wont even realize who's who.