Beta test ignorance is bliss

[Purple23Haze]

It may have a few kinks, yet this is my very first beat made audio so be gentle

I haven't figured a good to mix the beat and the vocal and I know the the start sucks but give it a chance

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fu ... =377430265

[Xray]

Ok here's some pointers. Are you scared of the microphone or something? than why the fuck are you whispering almost? Stand your ground man, you gotta record like your life is depending on it, gotta put emotion into it, have to deliver it nice, show your true rap voice, don't go Ying Yang Twins on us with that whispering shit. Flow seemed ok from what I heard.

But seriously man, you need to give yourself a break, at the moment, your thinking "this is my first audio on a beat" keep thinking that and you will never improve. You gotta have confidence when you ever hold a mic, got to believe in those words your spitting. At the moment it sounds like you don't give a fuck about your lyrics or the song. Rerecord and put energy into, put emotion into it, make it sound sick.

Your voice sounds good though, this is why I left you feedback like this, cause you got potential.

[enjinn]

Xray pretty much said it all...you got a good flow you just have to work on delivery...put more energy into it