shadows at night (all feedback will be returned)

[enjinn]

feedback is much appreciated and will be returnd... http://www.zshare.net/audio/5518923323bd5a3c/ ...thanks

[Emadyville]

Ok that actually was pretty good. The second verse i thought was better than the first and there was one line in there, something like: take love and hate and see how often they meet, that was pretty dope. Your voice isn't so bad even with the accent cause you have a pretty deep voice which stands out. The hooks flow was kinda off but your verses were pretty good. I would just say work on emotion and delivery more, overall I enjoyed it

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

idk i dont like your voice...doesnt sound good to me...guess personal opinion...
but as for the song....nice hook....good flow,good rhyme pattern
verses were pretty solid...3rd was the best
lost my interest in verse 1+2..idk
7.3/10

[gutawafang]

GOOD VOICE you have man!

[DelinQuent]

i love the deep meaning in the lyrics. voice sounds good too. flow is also good.

hook... i don't like it. it doesnt sound any different than the verses.

second verse has the same feed as the first.

keep it up

[enjinn]

Emady, CHR!$, fang, DelinQuent ...thanks a lot for the feedback...i really appreciate it!

[randomghost]

nice beat voice aint ma type good flow... nice delivery good stuff man...maybe u could change ur style or soem lookin forward to hear more

[AspirinE]

Not bad, Flow is on point allthought the mixing spoils the enjoyability, also work on the phrasing as well to make it flow even better... very heartfelt track. Id give more of ur tracks a listen

[enjinn]

randomghost, AspirinE...thanks a lot for the feed!...it means a lot

[Speech]

loving the lyrics...you write raps like peoms man you gotz my respect for that..yeah the quality kinda pulled down the flow cuz i love what i COULD have heard from you...you have a little accent but it doesn sound too bad...hmm and the voice...well idk how old you are or if your voice just comes out low when you rap but you should work on it to express the feelings better
if i'd only rate the flow and the lyrics this would be a straight 10/10
but voice/emotions/quality pulls it down
7.5/10

peace

[enjinn]

thanks a lot speech!

[B.A.D.]

damnz this is a real nice track, you still have some mixing issues, pellas shouldn't be that loud, also sounds too dry, try to amplify the reverb.. and the echo effect you added doesn't sound good, add the midtones following (thats what I recomend for the hook), also your flow is real real good, unique, where you from btw? you don't sound american or english

I love the lyrics man, definitivly a great track, also good delivery, you got good power in your voice, we could do a great collab together man

[enjinn]

the comments are really appreciated...thanks a lot!