ThomasAguanis- Apology

[ThomasAguanis]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5598395162421ef4/

May end up rerecording this since my voice started to fuck up after so many takes, I'm not used to this shit anymore. Plus, I may change a few lines and add some effects here and there.
It will be on a mixtape I'm planning, but will announce at a later time once I get it organized.
It feels nice writing and recording after not doing so for so long.
And as always, any and all feedback is welcome and appreciated, reguardless of opinion:y:

[Robbie G]

Cool song,the way you rap and you flow was pretty unique from other people on this site. It sounded odd at first because it was slower but grew on me.

"back on the seen, ready for war
"got dumped by a meaningless whore"

[Tash8]

ur voice pitch didn't match the beat at ALL...

lyrics were cool, flow was stop n go, reminded me of kanye west.

how old you? you sound 15...

decent song, i've heard ur older stuff, it was better.

[B.A.D.]

THANK GOD!!!!, I'm so fuckn glad u back on muzik!!

you need to fix that mixing quality ASAP cuz this is an excelent track, damn, this is the first time EVER on trshady that I understand the whole lyrics without being posted

please keep droping music, no homo but I love what you do

if you can re-master the song so it has better quality it would be appreciated, amazing song

I'm lost of words here, this is a masterpiece

10/10

[<Stiiccy>]

the beat was very nice....
your flow was to sloppy/choppy for me...try to smooth out your voice to make the flow better

your delivery was kinda annoying tbh...maybe you should try to dub the shit out of it..and i think it would be 10 times better..

lyrics were sub-par...i mean i felt what you were saying...it just sounded like you were TRYING to be simple...

overall it was ok...nothing special at all

5/10

[DelinQuent]

voice doesnt match the beat at all, basically ruining the track.

but other than that the rhyming is great. flow is different, it sounds more like youre talking to the listener which is great.

overall 7/10 for the voice.

[ThomasAguanis]

Cool song,the way you rap and you flow was pretty unique from other people on this site. It sounded odd at first because it was slower but grew on me.

"back on the seen, ready for war
"got dumped by a meaningless whore"

Thanks

Overall it was nice, Youve done better but youve not lost an awful lot while taking a break from it all. Might be my speakers but at a higher volume your vocals sound abit to high maybe? Its a nice song though man,youve been missed!

The vocals were a bit high, I tried adjusting them but I didn't do it properly. I'll end up re-recording this once I get everything back in order. Thanks for the feed

Some of the vocals we're annoyingly high, but aside from that.. Your lyrics and flow were great. I really enjoyed the way you rhymed some lines, it was unique. The song itself was pretty good and the beat choice was superb.

8.5/10

Thanks maybe, I'll be sure to make sure the vocals are fixed once i re-do it.

ur voice pitch didn't match the beat at ALL...

lyrics were cool, flow was stop n go, reminded me of kanye west.

how old you? you sound 15...

decent song, i've heard ur older stuff, it was better.

Yeah I need to fix my voice, I'm not used to recording and my voice was pretty shot after a few takes, but I'll make sure to fix that so I sound more like myself. I'm 18 by the way. Thanks for listening Tash

THANK GOD!!!!, I'm so fuckn glad u back on muzik!!

you need to fix that mixing quality ASAP cuz this is an excelent track, damn, this is the first time EVER on trshady that I understand the whole lyrics without being posted

please keep droping music, no homo but I love what you do

if you can re-master the song so it has better quality it would be appreciated, amazing song

I'm lost of words here, this is a masterpiece

10/10

Thanks a lot man! I'll be sure to fix the mixing stuff, I think it's some setting on my mic was changed and I need to re-learn what everything does but I think I know what to change already. Glad you liked it so much, the re-recorded one should be better..I hope

the beat was very nice....
your flow was to sloppy/choppy for me...try to smooth out your voice to make the flow better

your delivery was kinda annoying tbh...maybe you should try to dub the shit out of it..and i think it would be 10 times better..

lyrics were sub-par...i mean i felt what you were saying...it just sounded like you were TRYING to be simple...

overall it was ok...nothing special at all

5/10

i'll work on my vice this week and re-do the song when I feel comfortable with it again. I tried to be simple with this really, and a few more songs I'm writing will be but I also have some more complex ones in mind too.Thanks for the feed

voice doesnt match the beat at all, basically ruining the track.

but other than that the rhyming is great. flow is different, it sounds more like youre talking to the listener which is great.

overall 7/10 for the voice.

My voice seemed way to scratchy or something but I'll definitely work on it. Thanks for listening


Thanks again to everyone for the feed, I'll definitely take what everyone said in mind and fix the volume of the vocals and also the tone of my voice when I re-record this.

[Tash8]

damn man, ur 18? sorry about that then..

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

pretty nice laidback flow....i kinda love the hook....sick choice...
lyrics it was stable man...delievery was good for this type of track
yeah i agree you voice sounds a bit kez-like

[Kez]

How weird, i was just yesterday wondering where your music went and saying the Stage needed you back, and lo and behold, here you are.

Just call me God.

I have missed your shit, Thomas. Proves how much i wanted to hear it that i put it on my phone just to listen to it.

So here we go.

Beat is insane.
Flow is fuckin crazy, delivery is unique. At times it can sound a bit wooden for the most part it suits you perfect. I don't personally think it sounds much like me, but there you go. It's not like i'd find such a comparison an insult. As usual your multis are brilliant and stay relevant so that you stay away from just using multis for the sake of it. And the lyrics are just crazy, nearly every line made me nod in recognition of the effect of it.

I really can't say anything, you're still on form after this time and i thank fuck you're back cause we really need to get back the veterans. Show what this site really has.

Brilliance. I anticipate the mixtape incredibly.

[ThomasAguanis]

damn man, ur 18? sorry about that then..

yeah man I'm almost 19. I should take offense to that! But nah I'll get the vocals back in order and everything will sound better.

pretty nice laidback flow....i kinda love the hook....sick choice...
lyrics it was stable man...delievery was good for this type of track
yeah i agree you voice sounds a bit kez-like

Thanks for the feed. I'll take the Kez comparison as a complement

How weird, i was just yesterday wondering where your music went and saying the Stage needed you back, and lo and behold, here you are.

Just call me God.

I have missed your shit, Thomas. Proves how much i wanted to hear it that i put it on my phone just to listen to it.

So here we go.

Beat is insane.
Flow is fuckin crazy, delivery is unique. At times it can sound a bit wooden for the most part it suits you perfect. I don't personally think it sounds much like me, but there you go. It's not like i'd find such a comparison an insult. As usual your multis are brilliant and stay relevant so that you stay away from just using multis for the sake of it. And the lyrics are just crazy, nearly every line made me nod in recognition of the effect of it.

I really can't say anything, you're still on form after this time and i thank fuck you're back cause we really need to get back the veterans. Show what this site really has.

Brilliance. I anticipate the mixtape incredibly.

Thanks for the feed, God, it means a lot. Glad you liked it so much, I only think the rerecorded/revised version will be better. In order to show what the site really has, you need to get your sound back! I think this mixtape I'm planning will actually be completed for once, I have the beats and concepts already thought of and written a bit of for each song already yet am still adding things.

Also, I clipped another song I've been writing to a few people on msn (rapped it live) and the response was amazing. A few people were shocked, I'm not naming names but coming from them, it was a huge compliment, so only expect better from me in the future. Thanks again for all the feed everyone

[AspirinE]

you still got it dude... i loved tha track... needs a little work on mixing though but its no biggie.

[Xray]

Beat was cool, sounded smooth, good pic. Time to give my 2 cents.

I think I know what your problem is, you tend to high pitch your voice by trying to make your voice sound louder or shout. You need to really stabilize your voice man, cause if your voice was stabled you could be a really sick artist. I don't think its possible to lose flow even after a few years without recording. So the flow was natural, but the delivery wasn't too good but it was alright none the less. Lyrics like always is good, I don't even need to mention the multi's cause that's your spotlight craft. So really start working on stabilizing your voice man, and your delivery will sound much better. Also the vocals are really loud, needs lowering.

Good effort, welcome back to audio stage scene, now if you could return the favor, if not its cool.