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OVERKAST - Right Round Remix

Postby slimsoxshady » Mar 16th, '09, 21:07

aight so check it out guys...the beat is pretty amazing thats why i decided to rap over it...this is the first time i've ever rapped on a beat like this but i think it turned out pretty good and i think u'll like it...drop a comment on it and i'll return the feed. thanx



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Re: OVERKAST - Right Round Remix

Postby slimsoxshady » Mar 17th, '09, 23:20

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Re: OVERKAST - Right Round Remix

Postby Life Rise » Mar 19th, '09, 01:36

Hey man, flow was pretty tight on this. haha "alot of people asked me to do this........", Lyrics were good, wasn't completely feelin the hook. But yeah it was good overall, nice 1 :y:
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Re: OVERKAST - Right Round Remix

Postby slimsoxshady » Mar 19th, '09, 02:05

Life Rise wrote:Hey man, flow was pretty tight on this. haha "alot of people asked me to do this........", Lyrics were good, wasn't completely feelin the hook. But yeah it was good overall, nice 1 :y:


"......and when i say a lot of people, i mean nobody"....lol..thanx for the honest drop...there's only so much u can do to a hook of a remix of a #1 hit
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Re: OVERKAST - Right Round Remix

Postby mcZu » Mar 19th, '09, 18:41

Intro was a bit meh, flow was on-spot which is good. Delivery was nice, rythme and vibe were quite good.
The hook threw me off man, didn't sound that good imo. Your verses were lyrical not bad, average. And the pronounciation sometimes is kinda slured. But it's an enjoyable track, I enjoyed listening to it.
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Re: OVERKAST - Right Round Remix

Postby slimsoxshady » Mar 20th, '09, 00:30

mcZu wrote:Intro was a bit meh, flow was on-spot which is good. Delivery was nice, rythme and vibe were quite good.
The hook threw me off man, didn't sound that good imo. Your verses were lyrical not bad, average. And the pronounciation sometimes is kinda slured. But it's an enjoyable track, I enjoyed listening to it.


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Re: OVERKAST - Right Round Remix

Postby santos0303 » Mar 20th, '09, 15:59

For some real fire all original tracks not remixes check out my page...Hot beats...Superb lyrics and a style of flow like no other...



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Re: OVERKAST - Right Round Remix

Postby slimsoxshady » Mar 20th, '09, 18:42

santos0303 wrote:For some real fire all original tracks not remixes check out my page...Hot beats...Superb lyrics and a style of flow like no other...



http://www.myspace.com/santos0303


dude FUCK YOU, don't be advertising your shit on my topic :boxing:

and doing remixes is all part of a marketing scheme...it gets more people to listen to ur songs...
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Re: OVERKAST - Right Round Remix

Postby DelinQuent » Mar 21st, '09, 03:32

flow was nice, stayed on for the most part minus some minimal syllable stuffing.

hook was awful, but at least you did your own hook, so props for that :y:

this track also doesnt remind me at all of the original so good with that.

overall 6/10 due to the hook.
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Re: OVERKAST - Right Round Remix

Postby slimsoxshady » Mar 21st, '09, 03:42

dang everyone is hatin on the hook lol :sweating:

i'd like to hear some reasons...so i can know what exactly is so bad about it, cuz i like it
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Re: OVERKAST - Right Round Remix

Postby DelinQuent » Mar 21st, '09, 03:46

i dont think your voice was able to pull it off, but again props for doing you and trying :y:
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