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ur voice fits this beat perfectly n ur flow is good only thing i dont like is the hook only listened to the second verse kinda in the middle of writing something but saw u asked 4 feed in another topic but decent track
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liked the way you switched flows often,very professional sounding flow... didnt like the robot voice thing on the hook.you were going for a deeper topic but the hook sounded childish and dorky,would be a much better track if you re-did the hook to reflect the problems you're getting at.other wise good stuff
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hey man, i think this has potential to be a good track with a different hook and maybe more practiced rhymes, I dont know why but I kinda felt like it sounded as if you was reading as you was rapping it! all it really needs is a little more effort but over-all it could be nice