Insomnia - new beat

[mceddie]

hey guys just made this beat, its my 3rd beat ever, and im quite proud of it, any opinions greatly appreciated.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/592990709b5c05a1/

[mceddie]

alot of downloads but no comments?

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

first things first.....Beats Belong To The Studio Section
um i think its a good attempt to create a bassline....
drums are pretty raw but not in a positive way..they could be mixed smoother namean?
the hit hats are definitly too loud...
melody is out of place...like the melody doesnt have a sheme you know....
yeah..good attempt...but nuttin amazing to me...