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lil suttin... "a different level"

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Re: lil suttin... "a different level"

Postby preest » Apr 30th, '09, 17:21

I gotta say man it sounds like your kinda holding back, it sounds like you need just a little more passion in you speech! the was nice - lyrics were ok, but its just the delivery man! keep going
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Re: lil suttin... "a different level"

Postby DelinQuent » Apr 30th, '09, 17:28

wasn't feeling it.

hook was awful, i can't stand it to be honest.

flow was boring but steady. lyrics were decent, nothing spectacular. delivery was majorly lacking. i know you've been doing this for a minute but your delivery sounds like you're a beginner.

ive heard you do way the fuck better, i'm gonna take this as a throwaway verse and song and never mention it again lol. step it back up. :y:
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