Stress Relief... All feed returned.

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What's good dudes? New song... Not the final mixed version, cos I'm saving that for a mixtape I'm planning for the summer, but it's good imo... Take a look, feed, etc.. all feed will be returned, guaranteed.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/59897007f6821c28/


sit down, ink out.. The story of my life,
live, love, let go, sounds boring but it's right
I guess my biggest fear was what finally happened
I can only speak for me, but to me it was tragic
I was so into you, you were so into me..
But we had a few inconsistancies, (consistantly)
(they say) if you push hard enough, that doors bound to open
I busted on through & now, I can't close it
& now, I can't focus, now destinie's chosen
the rest of me's open, for the world to see
take a peek, buy tickets, or a tour for free (I'm sure you'll see)
My process is different, there's no cure for me
baby didn't understand, she had, to up & leave,
leaves are least of the worries, on this, fucking tree
my roots were grown different, there's no bucket or seed
Had to hide em under dirt so nobody would see
but you.. call me crazy, need to ink my thoughts
let em out on the paper & just speak my flaws
there's something meditative about the whole process
I wish I could explain it, for now, it's just progress
Crazy as it seems, I was aiming for your dreams
hoping we'd agree, & just maybe be a team
(While) scrambling I kept, insecurities at depth
they, managed to escape while security slept
I'M SUCH A FUCK UP, I mean, how'd I not see it coming
when I did what I did & you just kept running
Try to grill me, like i aint have a reason to blow (DAMN)
I saw what you wrote, that's all I needed to know
I responded with some quotes, tried to hide my anger
but you saw me as a threat, you told me I'm a danger
now you blaming me for stress, it's YOU THAT LACKS DEVICES
& don't even get me started on the sacrafices (cos I...)
i deaded it with any female I would contact
fuck "relationship", shit was more like a contract
GOD DAMN, either stand aside, or understand sii
& don't look at me, like I'm the fucking bad guy
I'm THAT guy, but damn, Its annoying as hell,
I'm a master of my craft, at avoiding myself
I Keep busy.. cos if I look too long in the mirror,
it gets clearer, there's really just a void in myself (unh)
I'd, recast my attributes if I could find the mold,
Cos, half my family roots have been diagnosed,
Depressive / bi-polar, (it's bless-ed the guy's sober)
I'm stretching the line over (from) aggressive to high roller
at the bottom of the barrel, all you look is up,
& Yet I'm LOOKING up, & NOTHING'S looking up
I must be lying to myself, I'm on, some long nose shit (Jappedo)
Who the FUCK would wanna listen to this, It's some bullshit

[B.A.D.]

beat is nice, who produced it???

holy shit... you really could manage to tell a "girl" story and use good rhymes schemes at the same time, thats real good... love how you play with some words.. really nice track man

also I noticed a BIG step up on your delivery, at the start you sound like just preparing.. but as soon as the vibe really got into you, there's a clear step on the emotion and stuff

all the whispers are gone, mixing is excelent, lyrics are top notch, story is good actually diferent from the typical...

nothing I can say but great job and great improvement

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beat is nice, who produced it???

holy shit... you really could manage to tell a "girl" story and use good rhymes schemes at the same time, thats real good... love how you play with some words.. really nice track man

also I noticed a BIG step up on your delivery, at the start you sound like just preparing.. but as soon as the vibe really got into you, there's a clear step on the emotion and stuff

all the whispers are gone, mixing is excelent, lyrics are top notch, story is good actually diferent from the typical...

nothing I can say but great job and great improvement

Damn bro, thanks... ADP from Shadowville did the beat.
Thanks for the positive feeds, loving it man.. I'll be sure to return it in a moment.

[Requiem]

GOOD GOD this is a great track, great job man

lryics and flow are very nice, and as ax said, structure is good. ur flow is pretty much perfect, no obvious fall offs. all i can say is maybe a lil more emotion in some parts. but very nice job with it.
8/10, man thats a good track

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^^^ Props for feed bro.. You're the second person to mention about some lines not having enough emotion, so i'll have to re-record before I put it on the mixtape!

[_Ironic_]

beat comes in nicely...your voice makes the beat seem like an odd choice for beat..the delivery is off a bit, but overall it's tight...lyrics were tight, structure was straight...im just not feelin the voice over this beat..overall tight drop though 6/10..


plz return the feed:http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=60913