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Big Ax-D - This Is The Place [Third Single]

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Big Ax-D - This Is The Place [Third Single]

Postby B.A.D. » May 16th, '09, 18:29

Album will release someday next week, can't put out an exact date cuz there's some problems on verses n stuff, but it will come VERY soon!!!

ARTIST: Big Ax-D
TITLE: This Is The Place
PRODUCED BY: Big Ax-D
MIXED BY: Big Ax-D
LINK: http://www.zshare.net/audio/60104913a0ea3f5f/
LYRICS:

(Verse 1)
Desperation, I scared of facin
the fact that race's bein racist lately
I'm below the south, hate me, face my creation
its a celebration to my niggaz who're placed in
this weird situation, tryna cross the border,
prision facing, deportations,
but I trust in Obama's new recession
to free up on detention, and stop anihilations
tryna make it, temptaion of a trip, but my creations crazy
Big to the Ax, won't stop to mention,
who was the face on my reparation,
since being an asshole to being a nation
I represent the radio station on a country with a hessitation
to play hits, even on vacation, I plea to continue hating
sprayin the facts across the sea, ocean, space and
universe, Galactical games
cuz on my earth occupation, I'll get you in rehabilitation
I stand in the middle of this separation
Cypress Hill, Ax-D, Kurupt, Cartel, save the nation
We Mexicans... we stand for a place in

(Hook)
This Dream got us, flying far away
what Will I be fighting for today
I'm a fighter, I will stand there
This is the pleace where you all want to be

(Verse 2)
How do you really feel about a guy who litterally died 2 years ago
but he came back strong, to survive,
walk the whole mile stay alive on a beehive's throne
the sting, they poison, the scorpions make me feel alive
when there's no more light, commotions full-take the nigh
place where niggaz fight, just one decides for all to try
a cypher, rhyme and rhyme till sky hits light
a cloudy day with no butterflies, surprisingly Big Ax-D could hear
you talking trash, but I got trained ears
who the one I'm gon fuck up next, who the one I'm gon beat his text
gettn sex, a step up from whats left
to those who theft that exit, pressed to death
I transport a message via music media, cuz I believe it will be deep in ya
if I make you dance you can solve my trivia,
being what I'm, no falls no decaf
focus in the strongest on the game to
save us again from kids that attempt to
freak a beat and a scream too much bullshit
how do you really feel about this new shit?

(Hook)
This Dream got us, flying far away
what Will I be fighting for today
I'm a fighter, I will stand there
This is the pleace where you all want to be
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Re: Big Ax-D - This Is The Place [Third Single]

Postby randomghost » May 16th, '09, 19:31

damn love the beat :worship: :worship: nice production....flow is good at most parts...lyrics is ok....didnt like the hook :sweating: :sweating: :sweating: at all :sweating: good single though...i like the vibe on this track :y: am feelin it..except the hook though :sweating: i liked it...good single..lookin forward to hear the album :flower: :y:
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Re: Big Ax-D - This Is The Place [Third Single]

Postby threeandtwenty » May 17th, '09, 09:48

did any one else notice only 1 allusion to sex in that entire song? :o

lol jk,i liked this one a lot better than the other 2.

it was different conceptually,i disagree about the hook...it came through pretty strong,beat was only ok,though it fit the mexican(-ish) theme very well.

on the whole i liked it :y:
whose arm is this?..i must've cut it off at the pharmacist
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Re: Big Ax-D - This Is The Place [Third Single]

Postby DOPE » May 17th, '09, 10:51

didnt like the beat, the hook couldve been sung better or you cudve just rapped it.

verses were good, but the same lyrics on a different beat wouldv made the song better, but still good, some good shit.

lyircs - good
flow - good
chorus - bad
beat - not my taste at all
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Re: Big Ax-D - This Is The Place [Third Single]

Postby DelinQuent » May 19th, '09, 04:12

overlays are off in the first verse, other than that mixing is fucking sick.
first verse has a weird flow, but it's steady. rhyming is nice.

hook is eh, not catchy enough, doesnt really match the beat.

who the one I'm gon fuck up next, who the one I'm gon beat his text-flow on that line was SICK, wish it would have stayed that way.

overall 6/10, the beat was very lackluster which ruined the rest of the song, it made it impossible to do a chorus and then it made your flow sound weird. a better beat would have done you well.
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Re: Big Ax-D - This Is The Place [Third Single]

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » May 19th, '09, 12:09

oh i was sure i gave feed on this haha :sweating:
beat was somthin near nice....typical ax pattern...your drums always have the same pace...makes them sound all the same..namean?
flow is icecold......lyrics are decent too
agree with the overlays....but hey im not a bit better when it comes to overlays :sweating:
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Re: Big Ax-D - This Is The Place [Third Single]

Postby Slim Zaddy » May 20th, '09, 09:49

thats' dope man ,, i liked , your flow and delivery is sick ,, flow is amazing , it's fast .. but i think if you were a little bit slower it would be more dope ,, but it's dope already ,, keep it up bro .. :y:
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