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Emcee Zu - Breathe Freestyle (Partially Pre-Written)

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Emcee Zu - Breathe Freestyle (Partially Pre-Written)

Postby mcZu » Jun 14th, '09, 14:47

http://www.zshare.net/audio/613573833b702392/#

I'll post the lyrics later, gotta write 'em down.

And with ''Partially Pre-written,'' I mean, that some lines used in that freestyle were pre-written.

Feedback appreciated.
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Re: Emcee Zu - Breathe Freestyle (Partially Pre-Written)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jun 15th, '09, 10:15

lyrics are good , but your voice is kinda boring as a freestyle , freestyle need energy in voice , try to do that , and it will be good
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Re: Emcee Zu - Breathe Freestyle (Partially Pre-Written)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jun 15th, '09, 18:32

yeah your voice aka your delievery sounds really bored....step it up...scream if its needed
flow was okay..i heard worse.....but again due your wack delievery your pronouncation suffers aswell..
so main issue for now is your delievery....
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Re: Emcee Zu - Breathe Freestyle (Partially Pre-Written)

Postby mcZu » Jun 15th, '09, 18:57

Thanks for the feed guys :y:
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Re: Emcee Zu - Breathe Freestyle (Partially Pre-Written)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 19th, '09, 07:51

Good lyrics with these..

okayish flow i guess

your delivery bored the hell out of me and the mixing blew acid chunks...get some emotion in them lungs son!!

come correct on that delivery, and everything else will fall into place
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