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Killed Him [Diss To Shadowville Member]

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 18th, '09, 00:11

http://www.zshare.net/audio/61513660d51d6a33/

time to fuck a wanker, buck the banger with some anger
I'm just bangin' and slammin, damage this faggot like hangers
fake slingin, fake blingin, you singin' bout killin
drillin this fakin' victim, taking clips and drill em in him
got the venom, pop them in them, you livin' in superstition
talkin' bout a numberline of guns, but with no precision
clip ya head like barbers, the author of slaughter
dismantle ya mandible, cannable animal saw ya
mechanical ammo and camo to smoke you like camels
you are grippin all the land in egypt sand I'm bout to slam you
Can't hold up fronts cause you french, fry ya ass with the tech
disrespect I'll disconnect with fifty specks of discontent
photoshopped documentation of canadian papers
does not save ya from shavers of truth, it cuts like my razors
I'm blazing you and cut you with ya pic enhanced knife
slice through 7 rows of fat like C sections, it's ya chin right?
fat ass motherfucker blubber lover, brother sucker
both ya asscheeks smother in bother, in jail with others
gettin' fucked and released in streets in fifty two weeks
just to go back and do it again cause you miss what you seek
asscheeks beggin' for penetration like bitches with menstration
you a fuckin' joke, no coke, no guns, no blazin
so stop with the fake shit, you aint shit, can't spray shit
or lace it, a disgrace to G's like money racists
This E thug sees slugs, he chugs, he runs
is this a rerun of these guns that he's on?
I don't think so, he just rushes with his lunches
his Mom gave em in a paper bag, later fag you over
come over, and get clotheslined with rage
you must be high on sage, to think you climbin' stage
want gold bars to flow hard and spit shards?
Somethin' to heal ya ED to make ya dick hard?
Decipher these cryptic, articulate, masterpiece lyrics
somethin' to lightin' ya spirits like a bullet sheer hit

Listen faggot. You're garbage, your whole style is weak, you can't rap.
You're fucking fake, photoshopped documentations.. HAHAH get the fuck outta here.
Fucking garbage son, get the fuck outta here with your fake shit.
I'm out, 1.
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Re: Killed Him [Diss To Shadowville Member]

Postby Solace » Jun 18th, '09, 00:30

You already know what I think about this.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zDzBRDQaq34
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Re: Killed Him [Diss To Shadowville Member]

Postby gutawafang » Jun 18th, '09, 02:35

"disrespect I'll disconnect with fifty specks of discontent"
WOW at this man.

Yeah, flow wasn't that precise. But your multies is good as ever man. :y:
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Re: Killed Him [Diss To Shadowville Member]

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 18th, '09, 03:38

Coleon wrote:damage like hangers? but anyway good sample at the begining, your flow is not good, this was written sub par for you also, i just thought it was not good man, ive been over there before and he prob could do better if i remember correctly, and finally dont call him an e thug then talk about drillin clips into someone anyway, rep TR and keep at it man

Damage like hangers, Gay men in closet lol.
I agree my flow wasn't all up there. I didn't put much effort in writing it also, though I thought it was at par with my other stuff. Good feed though. I'd like to see you do better with the lyrics. :whistle:
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Re: Killed Him [Diss To Shadowville Member]

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 18th, '09, 03:59

idk what everyone's talking about with the flow, i thought it flowed well, i actually can't think of any spots that it was off.

i understood all of the disses, this shit was dope. flat out.

your voice still needs a bit of work but it's definitely getting a lot better. good shit.
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Re: Killed Him [Diss To Shadowville Member]

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 18th, '09, 12:19

DelinQuent wrote:idk what everyone's talking about with the flow, i thought it flowed well, i actually can't think of any spots that it was off.

i understood all of the disses, this shit was dope. flat out.

your voice still needs a bit of work but it's definitely getting a lot better. good shit.

Thanks a lot bro! :worship:
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Re: Killed Him [Diss To Shadowville Member]

Postby James R. » Jun 18th, '09, 16:15

You killed him. Lol.

Naw I liked it a lot. I got all the punches personally. Flow was cool. Pretty much what DQ said. Good job man.
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Re: Killed Him [Diss To Shadowville Member]

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 19th, '09, 07:55

that shit came so hard wow...that was just WOW...

best diss song ive heard in a long time...I really enjoyed this man...

you came correct as a mother fucker...

keep this shit up and you'll be gettin more play than any of us here :worship:
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Re: Killed Him [Diss To Shadowville Member]

Postby DOPE » Jun 19th, '09, 11:23

lyrics are fucking fire, really enjoyed the lyrics

but

"fry ya ass with the tech"

if ur talking about a tech 9 sub machine gun then this line was bad, cuz ur talking about him being an E thug then u say this.
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My basic disk will make you take a razor to your wrist
Make you satanistic
Make you take the pistol to your face
N place the clip N cock it back
N let it go until your brains are rippin out your skull so bad
To sew you back would be a waste of stitches


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Re: Killed Him [Diss To Shadowville Member]

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 19th, '09, 17:14

DOPE wrote:lyrics are fucking fire, really enjoyed the lyrics

but

"fry ya ass with the tech"

if ur talking about a tech 9 sub machine gun then this line was bad, cuz ur talking about him being an E thug then u say this.

It's wordplay; tech as in gun and techniques. Thanks for the feed dudes!
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Re: Killed Him [Diss To Shadowville Member]

Postby Xray » Jun 20th, '09, 04:30

Lyrics were dope, could of been more personal, although without personals, he still got whipped cause I know this dude sucks so bad he couldn't reply. Delivery wasn't your best, same with flow, felt rushed, you still sound nervous. Cause I know what that feels like so everytime I listen to most of your tracks, I can see you all nervous and shit, you can tell by hearing cause your lips kinda move and shit. Its a diss and you wouldn't want to re-record this, so good job on the lyrics, but should of spent more time on the performance. Btw damn that beat is nuts, sounds like Eminem produced it for real.
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