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Re: STICCY!!!! 16 bar contest verse

Postby Xray » Jun 28th, '09, 07:13

Like I told you before man, I really like this verse, thought it was one of your best ones. Towards the end the flow is untouchable, very active verse, keep doing what you do man.
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Re: STICCY!!!! 16 bar contest verse

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 28th, '09, 11:50

Xray wrote:Like I told you before man, I really like this verse, thought it was one of your best ones. Towards the end the flow is untouchable, very active verse, keep doing what you do man.

thanks man...Btw I love your new trackk...still bumpin it
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Re: STICCY!!!! 16 bar contest verse

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 28th, '09, 17:20

i was gonna do this, then i said fuck it.

glad to hear your natural voice. flow suffers here though. however the rhyming is nice.

overall, idk man, the flow just didnt sound right. you're better than this.
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Re: STICCY!!!! 16 bar contest verse

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 28th, '09, 17:22

DelinQuent wrote:i was gonna do this, then i said fuck it.

glad to hear your natural voice. flow suffers here though. however the rhyming is nice.

overall, idk man, the flow just didnt sound right. you're better than this.

My bad ill just use a fuckin laxitive for better flow next time ? aye?
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Re: STICCY!!!! 16 bar contest verse

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 28th, '09, 17:27

sorry sticcy lol. if it makes you feel better, you're much better on other tracks, i think it was the beat that threw you off.
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Re: STICCY!!!! 16 bar contest verse

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 28th, '09, 17:29

DelinQuent wrote:sorry sticcy lol. if it makes you feel better, you're much better on other tracks, i think it was the beat that threw you off.

Or maybe the massive amounts of drugs i take...idk
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Re: STICCY!!!! 16 bar contest verse

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jun 28th, '09, 23:27

wasn't bad......your flow slipped up...........a few times......to me it sounds liek your still trying to find your style......i guess your going for a "dark" horror core type style of lyrics.....which is meh.....cuz after a while it gets repetitive...but keep dropping
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Re: STICCY!!!! 16 bar contest verse

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 29th, '09, 03:54

chambers wrote:wasn't bad......your flow slipped up...........a few times......to me it sounds liek your still trying to find your style......i guess your going for a "dark" horror core type style of lyrics.....which is meh.....cuz after a while it gets repetitive...but keep dropping

lol.. thanks...and naa im not tryin to find my style...it was just kinna wierd doing something over that kinna beat...was something different for me...
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