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Blood On My Hands

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Re: Blood On My Hands

Postby Jay-19 » Jul 8th, '09, 14:47

Probably the best I've ever heard from you DQ.
The concept of the song is really great, so is the rhyming.
I really like the hook, and I actually didn't mind the auto-tune at all on this track, it fits it real great! :y:
Delivery could have been a little bit better I think, some more emotions put into it, but fuck it, it's awesome as it is!

Keep it up man! :b:
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Re: Blood On My Hands

Postby Kez » Jul 8th, '09, 15:31

The autotune works fine, probably cause it's used sparingly.

Flow was near-perfect, and i liked the parts where it went kind of melodic.
Concept is good.
Chorus is nice though at times it sounds a bit abstract for me.
Lyrics work well enough; not too complex but not just one-worders.

Yeah, nice track
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Re: Blood On My Hands

Postby DelinQuent » Jul 8th, '09, 19:51

thanks for the feedback guys. the track will be finished for my album (Going, Going, Gone) with a feature from Pik.
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