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NEW STEVE SPAG - The Afterparty

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 28th, '09, 20:33

Just got in from the studio, and here's 1 on of the 2 tracks I did with this girl Dana Menard. She's a singer/rapper here in Windsor, and we've been working together on some music. This first song is called "The Afterparty". Let me know what you guys think!

http://www.myspace.com/stevespag

Steve Spag ft. Dana Menard - The Afterparty.mp3 - 3.79MB

http://www.soundclick.com/stevespag

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - The Afterparty

Postby Almostlity » Jun 28th, '09, 20:55

Wow.. Dope dope dope! Thats all i can say right now man..
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edit: Definetly gon listen to this alot in future :smoking:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - The Afterparty

Postby Solace » Jun 28th, '09, 22:10

Dope track Steve! This just another track, or Life Overdose material? Dana sounds good on this track. Catchy song. Your verse was really great, but it felt like it was more of Dana's song since she gets a verse and the hook while you only get a verse. Anyways, good track :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - The Afterparty

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 28th, '09, 22:19

Thanks for the feed guys, glad you like it!
@Solace: The 2 tracks we recorded today are both hers, I got a verse on each one. She's featured on my CD on a couple hooks, but that song was recorded about a month ago.

Keep the feed coming please!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - The Afterparty

Postby James R. » Jun 28th, '09, 22:34

Is this a Lady Gaga beat? It sounds mad familiar.

Dana sounds good pretty good on this. I wish her flow was a little smoother on the beat like when she's singing, as opposed to that almost stop and start she was doing when she was rapping. Lyrics are catchy. I like the hook. Do I hear autotune? Lol.

Steve Spizzal I'm like the delivery. The flow is much smoother. Lyrics are cool, not as tight as usual, but it's a club track and I ain't gonna bitch about it lol. Your verse sounded with with hers and the hook. This is smtn I could definitely hear bangin at a club somewhere. Good job man. And she did a good job as well. Nice production.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - The Afterparty

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jun 28th, '09, 22:40

didn't liek the beat....but then again....i'm not one for the club joints.....

didn't really like dana too much........her flow when she "rapped" was too choppy.........i just don't like that type of flow...some people might...........and for the hook............i just didn't liek it.........

your verse was cool for what it was.........just a club track....it flowed nice and you had a good delivery....

like i said this ain't my cup of tea but everyone does different things
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - The Afterparty

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 28th, '09, 22:52

WOW, thanks James!
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The beat is a soundclick one I believe, Dana picked it out, lol. The song was originally gonna be called "Drive 'Em Ga Ga" but I thought "The Afterparty" would suit it better.

James R. wrote:Do I hear autotune? Lol.

I was wondering when someone was gonna catch it, haha.

@Chambers: Thanks for the honest feed man.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - The Afterparty

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jun 28th, '09, 23:01

damn this sounds like a song you would hear at 4 in the morning at a crazy ass party
beat totally has that party feel & its starting to make me dance
that Dana girl is pretty dope but you highlight the whole song :y:
good work i'll be checking out more from you
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - The Afterparty

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 29th, '09, 02:11

DerdyPK wrote:damn this sounds like a song you would hear at 4 in the morning at a crazy ass party
beat totally has that party feel & its starting to make me dance
that Dana girl is pretty dope but you highlight the whole song :y:
good work i'll be checking out more from you

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Thanks A LOT dude!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - The Afterparty

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 29th, '09, 21:51

Bump.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - The Afterparty

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 29th, '09, 22:12

kinda feelin the beat.

not into this girls flow, it's boring.

you don't really sound right on this beat. flow and delivery are good though, lyrics are also good.

i like the hook, hate the bridge.

don't like her second verse either.

you killed the bitch lol.

overall it's decent. i feel like this beat was out of your range and she didnt do well on her verses. your verse was good though, just not on this beat. keep it up
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - The Afterparty

Postby Emadyville » Jul 9th, '09, 06:53

I've always enjoyed and really respected your shit, I thought you sounded pretty damn decent on this "club" type beat. I really liked your verse, flow was real good, lyrics where good and rhymes were as always top notch, I thought she did well on the hook, but like others said her flow made it sound kinda weird. Overall man for this type of song I felt like you pulled off :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - The Afterparty

Postby Brandon S » Jul 9th, '09, 10:29

another dope song man, this one really stands out tho. I played this shit in my car with a bunch of ppl in the car and they all thought it was dope as fuckkk
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - The Afterparty

Postby Tornado » Jul 12th, '09, 17:39

Don't like the beat, too poppy and is tagged too much...
I can see whta Dana was trying to do making herflow go to the beat but it would've sounded better being smoother, She was much better on the chorus though..

Your verse was alright, nothing special, kinda standard club rapper verse but atleast it shows you do a variety of tracks but still a ok track
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - The Afterparty

Postby BILI » Jul 12th, '09, 17:43

Its fuckin dope man
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