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Re: New Snippet

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 9th, '09, 12:38

TheWeirdoIsBack wrote:Pretty good shit man, I'm liking it. The rhymes were insane, and your flow was on-point the whole song. But, like Sajjad said, without the lyrics right next to me, it would have been a little difficult to catch everything. You get that worked on, and you have pretty much a perfect verse here.

Can't wait to hear more, keep it up.

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Re: New Snippet

Postby Jay-19 » Aug 9th, '09, 18:49

That shit was tight as hell man! :worship:
Your best yet in my opinion...


Dude, we gotta spit some fast shit together soon man. I think it can turn out really nice! :8)
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Re: New Snippet

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 9th, '09, 18:57

u rhyme it well but it didn't carry a meaning. still it can be enjoyed by others.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: New Snippet

Postby Mr. Chambers » Aug 9th, '09, 20:03

itch victora, here's the secret, son will be victorious
never spittin boring shit, tournin stages with frozen wrists
^this line wa the dopest one in the snip.

overall it was cool....the flow was very solid......and lyrically it was good....but it started to fall off @ the end...you seemed to drag or something...i dunno how to explain it...i think your delivery became weaker in the end...but keep stepping up...
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