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Emcee Zu - General Onslaught

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Emcee Zu - General Onslaught

Postby mcZu » Aug 8th, '09, 12:00

Feedback is appreciated :flower:

Song:
General Onslaught

Lyrics:
Generals are building up a lyrical Babylon
Even if you on a general floor –you wouldn’t be on our level, son
If ya’ll run the game –the Generals pedal
Only heart you got is of a dead man’s chest like Jack Sparrow
Stop joking, you’ll OD on our lyrical ammo
…When you record the Generals heat in a ledger
You in need of air? Then get that sperm working faster
We aint common, we past her –ya’ll lost, call us General mase
The Generals always amaze, we rap’s saviors
Whenever we spit –we leave the mic Darth Vadered
Yessir.. we be wrecking really fast
A small dose of Zu will leave ya shaking like Yasser Arafat
It’s a fact –the Generals leave you gasping
This Lyrical powers? Yeah we could-share like Ashton
Try looking for better than the General’s whole fort
And it’ll leave ya eye with a dark mark like that crew of Voldemort
Last edited by mcZu on Aug 11th, '09, 20:21, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Emcee Zu - General Onslaught

Postby BILI » Aug 8th, '09, 12:05

Thats pretty dope :y: :y:
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Re: Emcee Zu - General Onslaught

Postby mcZu » Aug 8th, '09, 12:15

BILI wrote:Thats pretty dope :y: :y:


Thank you BILI :b:
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Re: Emcee Zu - General Onslaught

Postby BILI » Aug 8th, '09, 13:14

^^np
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Re: Emcee Zu - General Onslaught

Postby Xray » Aug 11th, '09, 20:29

Your flow is improving bro, good work. Now gotta work on your rap voice and delivery. But damn you really really really need a new dynamic mic. That shit makes you sound different as hell.

But good improvement man, and the lyrics are indeed dope. :b:
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Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: Emcee Zu - General Onslaught

Postby mcZu » Aug 11th, '09, 20:37

Xray wrote:Your flow is improving bro, good work. Now gotta work on your rap voice and delivery. But damn you really really really need a new dynamic mic. That shit makes you sound different as hell.

But good improvement man, and the lyrics are indeed dope. :b:


Thanks, man. :b:

Yeah I know I gotta get a better mic. First thing I gonna do when I have the money to spend, lol.
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Re: Emcee Zu - General Onslaught

Postby Solace » Aug 14th, '09, 20:57

Dope lyrics and the audio well you definitely need a new mic. Some flow was off imo, like

Even if you on a general floor –you wouldn’t be on our level, son

or
Stop joking, you’ll OD on our lyrical ammo
…When you record the Generals heat in a ledger

Well it didnt flow to me at least. Just work on flow and getting a new mic for now cause your delivery wasnt honestly that bad.
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