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Postby Tranquil » Aug 31st, '09, 09:56

My Bad
Last edited by Tranquil on Sep 1st, '09, 08:37, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Nameless "Growin' Up" Snippet

Postby Slim Zaddy » Aug 31st, '09, 11:48

it's good man,, i liked it :y:
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Re: Nameless "Growin' Up" Snippet

Postby DelinQuent » Sep 1st, '09, 01:20

you sound bored. if you're bored while rapping, chances are the listener will be bored as well.

step up the delivery, you really have to feel the verse you're spitting. get into it more and it will sound leaps better.
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Postby Robbie G » Sep 1st, '09, 13:25

I listened to it before you took it off and it wasn't that bad. Just work on your delivery and put more emotion into it. You'll be fine. :y:
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