Please Lock This

[Tranquil]

Im sorry, im taken all my posts down

[Solace]

You got your flow down imo, and the lyrics were pretty nice. Just I think ya delivery was boring as fuck. You got a lil accent, I sense? Your voice is actually pretty good, just fix that delivery and the mixing was...boring as fuck. Add some overlays. Chorus was pretty good if you mixed it better.

Think you'd be pretty dope with better mixing, and a bit more emotion, keep it up.

[Tranquil]

You got your flow down imo, and the lyrics were pretty nice. Just I think ya delivery was boring as fuck. You got a lil accent, I sense? Your voice is actually pretty good, just fix that delivery and the mixing was...boring as fuck. Add some overlays. Chorus was pretty good if you mixed it better.

Think you'd be pretty dope with better mixing, and a bit more emotion, keep it up.

Yer, i get what you mean, the track will sound different on the album

[Robbie G]

Myspace doesn't load for me.

[Slim Zaddy]

beat is nice ,, flowed well , your lyrics are well chosen ,, but as solace said ,, it sounds so boring ,, work on ya delivery man ,,,keep it up

[SajN]

Erm, you bit two-three lines from Kuniva's verse from the Good Die Young song, they were pretty exact as his

[mcZu]

Erm, you bit two-three lines from Kuniva's verse from the Good Die Young song, they were pretty exact as his

You should team up with Coleon, so the two of you can form The Bite Police.

[SajN]

Erm, you bit two-three lines from Kuniva's verse from the Good Die Young song, they were pretty exact as his

You should team up with Coleon, so the two of you can form The Bite Police.

It's the first time I am saying that. I don't really care when someone says something that sounds alike, but this was exactly like Kuniva's.

[Robbie G]

I thought it was pretty good but the beat was way too loud.

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like this beat man hard hitting.

be less monotone, feel the words your saying man, it sounds like you dont beileive what your spittin. so work on that.

flow is simple and nice stays on beat.

lyrics are good, nice little told ya so concept, i liked it. chorus was simple and done nicely but it needs better mixing.

also when writing to a beat that has 1 major drum on it, you need to not drag your words as much, try run across it smoothers, the beats drum is pretty empty even though it sounds good, so you gt to fill that up and ride across the parts were there is no drum.

nice though, keep it up man definate potenital

[enjinn]

nice laidback track

[Tranquil]

like this beat man hard hitting.

be less monotone, feel the words your saying man, it sounds like you dont beileive what your spittin. so work on that.

flow is simple and nice stays on beat.

lyrics are good, nice little told ya so concept, i liked it. chorus was simple and done nicely but it needs better mixing.

also when writing to a beat that has 1 major drum on it, you need to not drag your words as much, try run across it smoothers, the beats drum is pretty empty even though it sounds good, so you gt to fill that up and ride across the parts were there is no drum.

nice though, keep it up man definate potenital

Thanks man, i will keep all that in mind