RedZek - State Of Coma ( Big Ax D ;) )

[Le Tunisien]

State Of Coma.....
respond to his state of emergency lol...
http://www.zshare.net/audio/657097684e8e4b04/
(Beat Produced By me)

fucking big axe d,ur so pathetic man
yeah ...aight

keep lieing to yourself,tryna get help
its bad for your health,so,stop and get wealth
you battlin yourself,and, whooped your own ass
thinkin that we wouldnt find out the facts
behind your past,it would never ever last
fucked up childhood,that fell in the path
mate im so great, cause im real your just fake
i just wanna beef,now u better beleive how,i eat a steak,
cause axelinious nigga wont even reach my plate,
the world needs to see that you bend and break
every cake u bake is another mistake,a lesson to take
so dont partake in beatings motherfuker
suck ur own dick, guess ur just another sucker
of fuck,forgot you got a pussy
ur just a fkn sissy but bitch dont push me
cuz imma cut your throat
with the fkn shit i wrote
ur like a Hoe! ;Serious is somethin I can't do with this FAG-
ill put u on a drag,then throw you on a bag
and if that aint strong,ill get the job done
you lookin at my gun,u dont wanna see it cum
the same fkn bullet,that james R took~it
stop bein stu~pid, you gonna end for good~kid
i crunch u like a cookie
big axe, what you gonna do soilder
when the gat come out of the fuucking holster
and i hold that gun to ya motherfukn shoulders
and put your back through ya chest as it fold ya
ur just a fkn loser,i already told ya....
my mom gave me success,urs gave u rough sex
if shes upset,i let her sucks less???
u really wanna diss me get ur ass fucked
my cock is like a weapon to mass destruct
and as for fingers,imma pull the middle
-ill Leave You Mortified,modified,/More To Find-
......yeah like..i left Clues To the motherfuckn Riddle..
am I seeing illusions of beating and bruising
or is it facts gathered from reason and proving
im seeing the movement gleaming right through it
cant deny myself it’s like me and this music
you'r fkn confusin,im settin this straight
target the problem no use letting it wait
setting the bait then im propping the trap
infact stop to act like u put rap on the map
axe biggest liar,dressed,in business attire
patients ran out like the clinics on fire
im seasoned to games and im the reason to blame
had an abundance of hoe weezing my name
like a fkn weezy wannabe lil wayne
more ass then rest stops creating wet spots
been sticking more 7 ups then red dots
im that cat always landing on his feet
turned to when the plan gets out of reach
talkin bout disco but u never saw the streets
lil Axe ill have you standing on your seats
"learn to rhyme,learn to speak"wat a fkn speech
dope,but on my trash,u been recently dragged
im prowling around to get some decency back

"owhhh look at you,ur blushing ha ha ha".....
haha?...ur blushing?...you sound like a faggot dude,i mean seriously though,wtf???
your just a " hoeeee"

[SajN]

You know I told you I am not going to get involved in this beef, so therefore I'll just feed it as a song.

The audio sucked. Yeah really, no emotions, no delivery.
I remember back in time when you posted audio's... well, you still haven't improved. When I or someone else gave feed, you took it as hate.
Well, I am not hating right now, but it wasn't good at all.
You just talked in to the mic, nothing else really.
Don't take this as hate.

[AliJack]

Please Ax-D collab with all audio members against him to end it. kill this zombie on the mic once and for all.I swear i can't believe i switched off my biggie smalls to listen to this.

[Le Tunisien]

You know I told you I am not going to get involved in this beef, so therefore I'll just feed it as a song.

The audio sucked. Yeah really, no emotions, no delivery.
I remember back in time when you posted audio's... well, you still haven't improved. When I or someone else gave feed, you took it as hate.
Well, I am not hating right now, but it wasn't good at all.
You just talked in to the mic, nothing else really.
Don't take this as hate.

lol u told me u wont listen to diss tracks
but oh well wat about the flow,maybe theres not emotion cuz im not sad or mad LOL

@ Ali : get lost lol no one asked ur opinion rofl

[AliJack]

You know I told you I am not going to get involved in this beef, so therefore I'll just feed it as a song.

The audio sucked. Yeah really, no emotions, no delivery.
I remember back in time when you posted audio's... well, you still haven't improved. When I or someone else gave feed, you took it as hate.
Well, I am not hating right now, but it wasn't good at all.
You just talked in to the mic, nothing else really.
Don't take this as hate.

lol u told me u wont listen to diss tracks
but oh well wat about the flow,maybe theres not emotion cuz im not sad or mad LOL

@ Ali : get lost lol no one asked ur opinion rofl

Idgaf, I still gave it. Lose the avatar, its gettin boring. and the signature too.

[Emadyville]

I'm posting this here too cause I did already in the creative writing a mod can delete my post from there if they want

If you had spit Ether, The Warning, The Sauce, and Nail in the Coffin I STILL woulda said this was terrible, that's how bad your audio and everything that's involved with recording is it's pathetic. If this wasn't a diss track I woulda given constructive criticism but how the fuck can you come at Ax-D with that shit and think it sounds good?

[Solace]

I'm not trying to get in beefing again, I find that shit a major waste of time and pointless, but I have to agree with Emadyville. Keep working on it.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

as a diss that was bad, as a rap it was worse....


whats up with your voice ? sounds really fucked up in a chipmunk on a bad version of autotune...sort out your mic or youll never be able to make a decent rap man.

you actually flow simple and stay on beat witch is a good start, but need to work on that quality before you can take it any more forward

[Le Tunisien]

as a diss that was bad, as a rap it was worse....


whats up with your voice ? sounds really fucked up in a chipmunk on a bad version of autotune...sort out your mic or youll never be able to make a decent rap man.

you actually flow simple and stay on beat witch is a good start, but need to work on that quality before you can take it any more forward

its true that my mic sucks the flow was there yeah =)
lol i didnt think its "terrible" ,whatever
so despite of the negative comments,i can keep recording diss song ^^thats for ax d to see that im never "scared" to do audios =)

[Xray]

Lol that was garbage, btw is this the same song you wanted me to mix? Cause the only reason I accepted to mix the song was to flip your words around and make it seem like your dissing yourself. That was until I heard the acapella and couldn't understand a word you said, so I said fuck it...

Here's some tips on music, leave rapping alone. Keep working on beats, but seriously rapping doesn't suit you. Unless you go take some English lessons and advance in them, cause you don't know how to speak english, you can type but you can't speak.

[Le Tunisien]

Lol that was garbage, btw is this the same song you wanted me to mix? Cause the only reason I accepted to mix the song was to flip your words around and make it seem like your dissing yourself. That was until I heard the acapella and couldn't understand a word you said, so I said fuck it...

Here's some tips on music, leave rapping alone. Keep working on beats, but seriously rapping doesn't suit you. Unless you go take some English lessons and advance in them, cause you don't know how to speak english, you can type but you can't speak.

no thats not the same song,and damn u that was a bitch ass move lol
wait that i get a real good mic,,,, lol
but hey i really can speak english , maybe i need more practise to spit it,or ill just have to go on slower beats,maybe u cant understand what i say cuz of how my voice sounds on that mic but in rl life i can perfectly speak english (rappin is not like talking) no wonder why im gonna studying english business in uni,and as for my marks in english: " Excellent" (like 18/20 usually) and i believe my accent is much better than ax's did u hear how he pronounces "R" ? damn , thats my opinion and i believe its 100% honest

and hey thats true,im good at making beats lol and keep getting better, Fl 9 ftw xD

[Xray]

^^I never said your good at making beats, I said keep making beats cause it doesn't require your retarded sounding voice. And no you can't speak "perfect" english. And Ax-d is MUCH better than you, actually everyone you've "beefed" with is. You went at Anon, he can slaughter you audio/text. And I'm pretty sure Solace can beat you in text AND audio. So look homie I don't know what your trying to prove, but your music talents, are talentless. It would of made sense if you didn't care about anyone and just went your way without dissing anyone from the start, but its ridiculous now. Beef here, lose, beef there, lose, and then try to defend yourself like you can spit or make a beat lol. You can't do either.

[Arabian Shady]

dude that was a really bad drop, apart from the audio even the text was general , like in most places the rhymes were just a bunch of half ass punches that could be said to any 1!, the text had no personals , or punches worthy of a diss track.
this was a huge step down from your last verse

[B.A.D.]

lol