Mr. Vewb up and coming

[jba1me]

ok im in the process of making my first mixtape and so far these songs are the ones i got so far. id appricate some feedback or whatever. sorry if it sounds a little off since i havent been 2 a studio or anywhere like that. http://www.myspace.com/mrvewb

[classthe_king]

Your flow, delivery, rhymes and lyrics are horrible.

[FAME]

I like the beat on the first one that comes up, but you sound so monotone as if you don't care. Plus I feel the lyrics need some work. But keep trying.