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New Anonymous

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 8th, '09, 22:54

http://www.zshare.net/audio/6668539192195619/

I'm a lyrical prodigy, honestly,/
why does this bother me?
an odessey I got to see
another monstrosity//
apologise to me, /
stupid vowel sized decree
you foul piece of shit, you wanna be
another part of me?//
Back up, spray with abundance/
and leave you with nothin'
I'm bustin', trust in
the fact that it's hatred I'm bustin//
sick and tired of you lairs/
disguising in fires, why are
you frying? you stupid bitches
you're dying in your fires//
insurgent in urgent emergency/
verbally hurting these
beats with the purposely placed
lyrical verbs you see//
impeccable, neurotransmitters/
hands sicker, lyrics like a band, quicker
to my brain, drinkin' hard liquor//
I battle, dismantling mandibles/
like a cannable animal do
hannible in a camo suit//
rediculous lyricist, word I spit/
will sever shit, remember this
I create fantasy worlds like sega genesis//
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: New Anonymous

Postby classthe_king » Oct 8th, '09, 23:17

Lyrics were dope as always, flow was good too. I don't really like the voice or the delivery on this though. You tried to sound to angry and it didn't come out right IMO. Beat was sweet though. Overall id say 7/10.
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Re: New Anonymous

Postby gutawafang » Oct 9th, '09, 00:54

Loved the flow totally man. Lyrics as usual, dope multis, dope vocab. Full marks minus one because of audio quality. HAHA. :D But it's full marks. ;)
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Re: New Anonymous

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 9th, '09, 02:13

damn, the whole song is a big rhyme

this is nuts :worship: :worship:
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Re: New Anonymous

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 9th, '09, 11:47

love the snowgoons instrumental :worship:
flow was messy....idk you just kept rhyming for the sake of it...didnt like it that much
quality was hurtful too...haha...no hate man but this wasnt impressive to me
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Re: New Anonymous

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 9th, '09, 11:49

:worship: :worship: Thank you for the feed
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Re: New Anonymous

Postby Solace » Oct 9th, '09, 21:42

Dope track :y:
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Re: New Anonymous

Postby Kez » Oct 9th, '09, 21:56

The flow and lyrics are nuts, but i think on your delivery you mess up a couple words and sometimes slur and kinda eat your words

But still sick track
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Re: New Anonymous

Postby Requiem » Oct 11th, '09, 19:55

sick ass beat man, phantom of the opera ROFL :worship:

flow is sick as hell, and delivery is really good man. your lyrics are (do i have to say it) fucking crazy! I think if you had studio quality you would be perfect. cuz i feel like your holding back on the mic.. sense there's no pop reduction on it. :y:
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Re: New Anonymous

Postby enjinn » Oct 13th, '09, 23:21

you had nice lyrics and a good delivery...real nice beat...too bad it was so short
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Re: New Anonymous

Postby Justice » Oct 17th, '09, 15:47

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you F'in MURDERD this beat bro, murderrrrrrrrrrrrrd it, ama have to check alot of your stuff that was FIRE!!!, you'll have check me out some time, if u actually liked me we cud bust a collab, time will tell, stay up, dope as bro dope as
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