Emcee Zu - No Failure

[mcZu]

Feedback is more than appreciated.

Emcee Zu - No Failure

Lyrics:
Tremendous Hip Hop share-luck based? (Naah)
I’ll leave that to a Conan Doyle case
No barbarian, sophisticated and praised
Humongous chain of thoughts in place
Ought to amaze, I won’t stop ‘till I got blisters on my feet
Aint talkin’ ‘bout the distance in a street
I don’t need no coal on my song to bring the heat
Indeed, simple words turn into lost sound
A hard core-opt, I don’t mean tha dog pound
Lost and found amount to some reasons
So if I fall down I spring back up and I aint talkin’ seasons
Like legions I be in jury to manipulate the hammer or
Just to act plain, fly like a hero senator
Gotta end before I wake up, the buzz like Black Thought
Not quite enough just like how I thought
What? I shake haters up like Nas’ ex
Even if they sleep on me like a mattress after sex
That said, now let me clear my throat like Funk Master Flex
I got it all mastered, yes..

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

i can see you doin well with your accent..has somthin raw about it..so is the voice
your flow sounds off....example "don’t need no coal on my song to bring the heat,Indeed"
altho with practise you gonna learn to vibe more with a beat
but yeah keep it up man!

[Mr. Chambers]

^what he said.....

your quality sucks....but ok....beyond that...your flow is shakey.......just sit back and vibe with the beat a few times b4 writing..............

[mcZu]

i can see you doin well with your accent..has somthin raw about it..so is the voice
your flow sounds off....example "don’t need no coal on my song to bring the heat,Indeed"
altho with practise you gonna learn to vibe more with a beat
but yeah keep it up man!

Thank you, I gotta work on the flow.

^what he said.....

your quality sucks....but ok....beyond that...your flow is shakey.......just sit back and vibe with the beat a few times b4 writing..............

Thanks, gotta smoothen out the flow. And, yes, my quality sucks, lol.

[mcZu]

an mczu audio track

i liked the voice, and the song, but as the people above said, the flow was a BIT off. and like they said, just gotta ride with the beat. and another thing, it's good to know your verse off by heart before you record it, it enables you to concentrate on the flow more, 'cause rapping whilst reading is a lil more difficult i think. but i don't know if you knew it off by heart or not, just saying.

looking forward to hearing more

Thanks for the feed Scotty, appreciate it.

[Slim Zaddy]

LIKED YOUR VOICE, mabye if rapped a little bit faster ,, it would be better ,, but yeah as others have said,, ya flow ,, need improvement , and you need to work on the delivery ,, .. .,, nice to hear from you bro ,,, keep doing ya staff