Redzek - Banned (not a diss)

[Le Tunisien]

i wrote this while being banned and after ...... no offense for ali in some lines cuz i wrote it when i still had the hate.....check it out

http://www.zshare.net/audio/6841480652a8e6ed/


fallow with lyrics:

I been checkin daily,
If trshady mails me
Nobody here felt me
Im too cold to melt me
I never really fell B !
But mods here banned me
Im sayin its insane
How sajn been slayin
Hard to be the mayne
Bannin me from stayin
Its okay i forgot it
Ill prove that i got it
Man this beef was stupid....
You can see what the truth is
Real talk.........im the truest
By AX, Im influenced..
Sorry for the Trash Talk
Sorry for the ass Stalk
You was right i was wrong
I cant fight through a song
Useless to bring it on
Lets be friends C'mon
I admit i aint strong
Enough to ignore thongs
I hate jack its fact
Cuz he acts like a fag
Your ass will get smacked
Keep sayin im a Wack
A lyricist you never been
The faggiest i ever seen
The ugliest,say im mean

....shit i'll stop talkin...

[Chorus]

You dont want me to be that Tuni
You do owe me An Apology
You dont know me,so its hard to see
If you dont like me......dont talk me



.....if you dont like me.....dont talk me......


Okay....'ll be walkin
Away from this shit
I' will Try to be sick
N show it through my spit
Wich will make a Conflict
You dont like me?suck a dick
Best policy is honesty..
What bothers me is privacy
Now what the fuk im tryna see
Is if im dope honestly
Be cool?could you promise me
I aint makin no Profits G
I dont pretend a prodigy
Peacefull,yeah i gotta be
Positive just got in me
This beef was a mockery
These niggas been blockin me
Nobody got a cock in here
Nobody got a glock in here
I'll keep my mouth shut
Go ahead call me a slut
Cuz im not here to kill
And im not here to fill
Your boredom with chill
But still....what i will-
-do is prove that im ill
been fightin for nothin
now i gotta get somethin

[Chorus]

You dont want me to be that Tuni
You do owe me An Apology
You dont know me,so its hard to see
If you dont like me......dont talk me

[Le Tunisien]

Sorry for the ass Stalk

any problem?and no,i dont mean it like that,not the gay was as u thought it was,its just an expression...When i say im stalking yo ass i only i mean im stalking you

[Solace]

I havent listened to but I read all the lyrics and thought it was pretty good to settle it down. Actually I dont think I seen AliJack post in a bit, maybe you scared him away? Lol. Anyways, multies were nice and you kept on the story. Decent chorus. Nice piece

[Le Tunisien]

I havent listened to but I read all the lyrics and thought it was pretty good to settle it down. Actually I dont think I seen AliJack post in a bit, maybe you scared him away? Lol. Anyways, multies were nice and you kept on the story. Decent chorus. Nice piece

Thanks for the feedback ooooomar =)

[B.A.D.]

its cool man

Edit: nice to see a well.. almost no beef track, cuz still has that ali jack shots, but well.... being honest again, you need a big big improvement... first in the quality, ask someone to help you out with that, flow is well kept but has some flaws in it, but keep on the practice... its funny to see that thanks to me you've been practicing, beef makes you practice a lot.... so just... keep the practice, and work on that quality... plus, urgently!!!! buy a new mic

[Le Tunisien]

:y: its cool man

cheers bro

edit: thanks for the advice,and yeah once i know im good enough,and would be worth to get a new mic, i will
so yeah all that beef shit was like a practise to me....and thats only thanks to you

so you already know......

Beef squashed homie

[DelinQuent]

aren't you white? that means the N word is a no-fly-zone...

anyway, quality needs to be improved. pronunciation needs to be improved. you've got an understanding of flow but that needs work as well. however you are clearly improving, so keep working.

[Le Tunisien]

aren't you white? that means the N word is a no-fly-zone...

anyway, quality needs to be improved. pronunciation needs to be improved. you've got an understanding of flow but that needs work as well. however you are clearly improving, so keep working.

thanks man,i'll work on your advices

[BILI]

I liked it,it aint somethin awesome but its good,I like the multies ,your flow was ok ,but I hate the quality,it fucks it up

[Le Tunisien]

I liked it,it aint somethin awesome but its good,I like the multies ,your flow was ok ,but I hate the quality,it fucks it up

ok thanks bili
i guess i'll buy a new mic to fix the fucked up quality

[AliJack]

I havent listened to but I read all the lyrics and thought it was pretty good to settle it down. Actually I dont think I seen AliJack post in a bit, maybe you scared him away? Lol. Anyways, multies were nice and you kept on the story. Decent chorus. Nice piece

niigga please.

and yeah, its all good son.

[Solace]

I havent listened to but I read all the lyrics and thought it was pretty good to settle it down. Actually I dont think I seen AliJack post in a bit, maybe you scared him away? Lol. Anyways, multies were nice and you kept on the story. Decent chorus. Nice piece

niigga please.

and yeah, its all good son.

[Xray]

Damn I'm pretty impressed with this man, really, you stepped up. Flow was a nice step up, and the rhymes were nice, had some nice smooth multis in there. Delivery wise, I think it was good, you controlled your voice pretty good. Quality sucks majorly, you HAVE to find a better mic, even a shitty $10-20 mic would be fine. Song is an improvement from your last, but I gotta admit, the beat/lyrics, the style of them kinda reminded me of Eminem's style. Song would sound better if you re-recorded it with a different mic, and your delivery/flow could use the second shot and perfect it.

[Le Tunisien]

Damn I'm pretty impressed with this man, really, you stepped up. Flow was a nice step up, and the rhymes were nice, had some nice smooth multis in there. Delivery wise, I think it was good, you controlled your voice pretty good. Quality sucks majorly, you HAVE to find a better mic, even a shitty $10-20 mic would be fine. Song is an improvement from your last, but I gotta admit, the beat/lyrics, the style of them kinda reminded me of Eminem's style. Song would sound better if you re-recorded it with a different mic, and your delivery/flow could use the second shot and perfect it.

thanks man,i really appreciate your positive feedback,thats cool...you are encouraging me to get a quality mic thanks alot bro!! i'll definitely rerecord it

[gutawafang]

I love the flow, seriously. Good job man. I loved it. I felt it, at least, no matter how bad you rapped it tbh. Keep improving. I have much to learn too.