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Falk f. Jay-19 - Pray To God

Postby Jay-19 » Nov 19th, '09, 21:53

My friend Falk, who's a noob producer/noob singer, wanted to make a track and sing on it, and like the nice guy I am, I stepped up and wrote two quick verses. Just thought I'd share with you guys.
Not really too happy about it, but it's not my track so...

Just tell me what you think about Falk (he wanted to know if he's good or bad) and me of course. :smoking:


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Re: Falk f. Jay-19 - Pray To God

Postby Le Tunisien » Nov 19th, '09, 22:15

nice song though :flower: and about your friend...hes not bad ..sometimes i feel that the hook if a lil off beat though idk ^^ :happy: 1st verse the best :y:
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Re: Falk f. Jay-19 - Pray To God

Postby Jay-19 » Nov 19th, '09, 23:58

Thanks for the comment Tuni. :8)
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Re: Falk f. Jay-19 - Pray To God

Postby Xray » Nov 20th, '09, 08:10

Wow man your verses are inspirational as fuck! Flow is awesome really good flow, and the lyrics are heart felt. I love the first verse more than the second one, cause you came in and tore it apart, and you had more syllables in your lines which made it more full than the second verse. Second verse was dope though none the less. Your friend made the beat? O_O wow, when I read "noob producer" I wasn't expecting a crazy beat like this. Could of sworn Life And Death Productions made this beat, sounds like something he'd make, crazy beat regardless to whoever made it. Falk has an alright voice for singing, just needs to practice more to get the feel of the flow more, and needs to put some emotion into it. This track should be yours featuring Falk, cause you tore it apart! :worship:
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Re: Falk f. Jay-19 - Pray To God

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Nov 20th, '09, 11:54

even you never feed other stuff here ya go...
mixing is a bit loud....also a bit much reverb (but not sure on that)
and your rhyme sheme seems always the same..no hate ..its very perfect for what it is..but i would like to hear you expand your style a bit
as i said...flow is perfect for what it is...your buddy cant sing for shit...haha...didnt like sorry
but good producer indeed....was on the same track as sajjad....wasnt expecting somthin like that :y:
overall no replay value..so yeah :y:
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Re: Falk f. Jay-19 - Pray To God

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 20th, '09, 12:27

Jay can you upload it to any other site man :)
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Re: Falk f. Jay-19 - Pray To God

Postby Jay-19 » Nov 20th, '09, 15:55

Wow thanks for the feed Saj, reallt appreciated! :b:
And just so everybody knows, Falk didn't produce this beat, he found it on the internet and wanted to sing on it, so it's not his.

And thank you too Chris.
And the reason why I hardly leave feed on your tracks is because I have no computer at home so I'm usually on the computer at work, and can't really listen to music there. But as soon as I get my new comp in December, I'll return the feed instantly, so don't worry ya'll! It won't go by unnoticed. :8)
And you just wait for my mixtape Chris, it has a lot of different schemes and styles to it. :smoking:

Thanks again ya'll for the feed. :b:
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Re: Falk f. Jay-19 - Pray To God

Postby enjinn » Nov 21st, '09, 03:49

love your energy...you got a good flow and nice rhymes...hook was aight...good shit...do you really have green eyes?
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Re: Falk f. Jay-19 - Pray To God

Postby Jay-19 » Nov 21st, '09, 13:17

enjinn wrote:love your energy...you got a good flow and nice rhymes...hook was aight...good shit...do you really have green eyes?



Yeah I got green eyes... but they shift between green and brown somehow. :confusion:
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Re: Falk f. Jay-19 - Pray To God

Postby gutawafang » Nov 21st, '09, 13:46

I checked it. It's pretty good. Sorry I dunno how to feed audio much. I simply enjoyed the lyrcis and the flow.
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Re: Falk f. Jay-19 - Pray To God

Postby Jay-19 » Nov 21st, '09, 16:26

gutawafang wrote:I checked it. It's pretty good. Sorry I dunno how to feed audio much. I simply enjoyed the lyrcis and the flow.


That's good enough for me. :8)
Thanks for checking it out. :b:
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Re: Falk f. Jay-19 - Pray To God

Postby Tornado » Nov 26th, '09, 03:56

Wow, another great track man, seriously feeling you on this, both verses are sick, first one especially and combined with the beat, it all falls together beautifully so rap wise, no faults. Falk did OK for a noob singer, but there is loads of room of improvement but he did his job. Overall a solid 8/10..damm Mister Vicous would've been a dope tape from the tracks i've heard
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