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It's Kinda Dreamin' - Slice

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It's Kinda Dreamin' - Slice

Postby Slice » Dec 4th, '09, 10:16

here's another new song from me. http://www.myspace.com/slizzle88

please let me know what u think about it.

thanks :happy:
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Re: It's Kinda Dreamin' - Slice

Postby Vettori » Dec 4th, '09, 14:18

seemso kay, definatly need to work on ur delivery. sounds choppy like ur reading from the paper...

try memorizing it, and work on ur transition from word to word.. could come out more fluent.. pretty cool concept, few lines could be better.. but this is good, how long yu been rapping ?
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Re: It's Kinda Dreamin' - Slice

Postby Slice » Dec 4th, '09, 16:29

thanks vettori. yeah i know i need to work.

i been rapping for a long time, i think more than 2 years
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