Bar - Regret (Ft. Big Ax-D)

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Bar Ft. Big Ax-D - Regret
http://www.zshare.net/audio/69228566161d4881/

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=6H9DFP6K

props to ax-d on the quick and sick verse.

Bars verse (if you have problems with accent and want to follow along)

anger in my mind nothing else that i can find
tonight i might do something fucked like i am leading to the blind
but not this time people come on no more preaching on the rhyme
dont know what it is ill do infact i never really do
a part of the impulse crew an i aint talking about deodrant
im talking about walking up and saying fuck you in the moment
that leads to a straight fight in the middle of the late night
but i aint really that phased this is what i have made right ?
such a fucked up persona of witch i am the owner
give me a couple more times with the bitch then ill dis-owner
i might wake up tomorrow murder chages on my wrist
or discover i have written my own suicide list

ax-d feel free to post your lyrics and ill edit them in here

feedback appreciated

[Tornado]

Beat is cool, suits the kind of track. Bar, your verse is solid, but i dunno the quality sounds a low on the norm which i remember, it made it kinda harder to undertstand with the accent for someone who dpesn't know how you sound, but lyrics are straight fire. Ax-D was also a great verse aswell, bit more simple lyrics but dope aswell. Only other thing is the track is too short but overall 7/10

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Beat is cool, suits the kind of track. Bar, your verse is solid, but i dunno the quality sounds a low on the norm which i remember, it made it kinda harder to undertstand with the accent for someone who dpesn't know how you sound, but lyrics are straight fire. Ax-D was also a great verse aswell, bit more simple lyrics but dope aswell. Only other thing is the track is too short but overall 7/10

thanks man, and yeh thats my mixing for ya i aint to great at it lol

[Steve Spag]

Audio ain't working on the link I click.

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Audio ain't working on the link I click.

sorry man, still works for me lol, new link added, megaupload though, sorry

[Tash8]

damn man that's impressive, besides ur shitty ass quality... but i was wondering could u send me this beat, it's dope...

flow is great, lyrics are nice

ax-d wow you too man, the way you flow is sooo smoooth.. great job..

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

that was quick man..real nice....flow sounded pro...delivery sounded a lil bit less pro tho....due breathing...and was strange at one place
hook was a kool simple...added to it
ax-d did nice on flow too...lyrics were decent...his singin also added to it...liked it
beat was some on some mainstream shit overall nice one guys..besides mixing of bar's verse

[randomghost]

cool short track...beat is ok...verses was good..but mixing was really bad in bar's verse....overall good 2 see ya back bar...cool short track guys

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

Bar, that's a nice accent you have. I've never heard a Scottish accent in rap. I like it.

[Xray]

Not feeling the beat, sounds like the producer sampled an arcade game or something lol. Bar your verse, the lyrics weren't anything special, wasn't feeling them, they seem rushed. You could of done better, and your breathing messes up your flow at times, and the mixing is really bad makes it hard to like this verse. Ax-d, reverb is out of the roof lol, should tone it down a bit, but the flow and lyrics were cool. The singing/rapping style fitted this beat, but should of ended the verse better imo. Track is alright, mixing is lacking, with better mixing this would have more replay value. And it won't make your verse sound emotionless, Bar.

[Steve Spag]

Pretty dope track. I found it hard to stay focued on your verse because of the accent but when I was reading the lyrics I seen it was pretty sick. Ax kills it as usual, not much more else to say. Quality is pretty decent, beat ain't really my style but you guys do nice on it.

Keep it up!

[Emadyville]

Beats good, hooks nice I like that. First verse the flow coulda been a little better cause sometimes you were catching up, mixing coulda been better but I liked your lyrics a lot.

Second verse, Ax-D you killed it, delivery was what made this fire, lyrics and flow were good, mixing sounded real good on that.

Overall I thought it wasn't bad, but there was a big difference in verse quality which brings it down and the delivery and flow of both verses, where you lacked Bar is where Ax shined, I think you redo your verse some good mixing and a better flow/delivery this will be a real solid, dope track. Good work to both of you

[Mr. Chambers]

Not feeling the beat, sounds like the producer sampled an arcade game or something lol. Bar your verse, the lyrics weren't anything special, wasn't feeling them, they seem rushed. You could of done better, and your breathing messes up your flow at times, and the mixing is really bad makes it hard to like this verse. Ax-d, reverb is out of the roof lol, should tone it down a bit, but the flow and lyrics were cool. The singing/rapping style fitted this beat, but should of ended the verse better imo. Track is alright, mixing is lacking, with better mixing this would have more replay value. And it won't make your verse sound emotionless, Bar.

^i pretty much c/s his feedback..i felt the same......but keep dropping dunscout