by Vettori » Dec 7th, '09, 16:58
hmmm ur content isn't really Out there... i liked the duffle bag one a bit more... this was to layed back, like no expression, u gotta give it some hype.. make me feel excited to hear it, Chorus.. ugh i am not one for simplicity. so it gets to me, whenever someone does a repetative hook LOL... but still i can see u gettin better.. just work on ur complexity a little more, and ur delivery