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I Go Off Freeverse

Postby Mr. Chambers » Nov 22nd, '09, 02:08

first thing i've wrote in weeks...and first time i've recorded in a month and change....

http://www.zshare.net/audio/68803102d61b7283/

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i'm back....ready to attack//
combat any bitch...heavy on the tracks//
son.....i'm deadly and in fact//
raps rapidfire like semis on ya ass//
half you kats ain't writing for the win//
i'm blowin dust into ya chin....you fightin with the wind//
shit.....i'm likin this again//
its all working out....i'm exercisin....lets begin//
on my level?...i'ma highness....take my side//
i know what hov ment with empire state of mind//(ha)
i'm fire.....play...rewind//
spit amped rhymes.....the mic wire takes a ride//
any kid think they higher make some time//
and i'll skool you on a tighter way to rhyme.....///
these kats bogus.....hopeless//
i'm like combinin every single fighter hate my prime//
i'm too nice....all the other get in line//
get outta line...back in order............step on spines//
you take pride on being original G//
i pride myself in taking over digitally//

no its tom chambers........and i'm rippin the beat//
fuck that soft shit......i'm like a hitman for beef//
kats like chambz do some shit for the streets//
give me cars homes and get me sittin in Greece//
see...i'm hungry for food sittin in grease//
but i'm tryna be overseas.........fish and a seat//
ina 5 star place...owner givin me frees//
my fans @ my shows.....dudes wish to be me//
tell me....why would i listen to streets//
when the streets never ever really listen to me//
50 money....lupe skill...by way of my rhymin styles//
expect a crime wave to be shinin down//
all my enemies....look around...find em now//
nowhere to be found.....outta sight..........not a sound//
go ahead ....test for the hate//
i'm Microsoft...upgrade...get this internet explorer 8//
ughh....not hard to see that your a fake//
muh fucka can't even stay on beat for a take//
and as far as that other mother fucka//
name still in your mouth brother shut up//
that bitch better learn to cut his loses//
stop talking on some bullshit...fuck the gossip//
but i'll drop it//
you kids better reconize...step to mine?...my rhymes can turn weaponized//
weaponized?....is that a word dammit?//
no....but i'm used to slaughtering this language//
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Re: I Go Off Freeverse

Postby mcZu » Nov 22nd, '09, 02:16

Ortiz already buried this beat, lol.

But, you did a good job on it, nothing to special, you could have dropped some harder hitting punches, but it is good. Flow is dope, like it, delivery is good. Mixing sounds a bit strange, but, it's a dope freestyle/freeverse.

And you stopped yelling Tom Chambers? :o
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Re: I Go Off Freeverse

Postby DƎRDYPK » Nov 22nd, '09, 02:17

DAMN!!!!! :worship:
you killed that :y:
vicious flow Tom :worship:
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Re: I Go Off Freeverse

Postby Mr. Chambers » Nov 22nd, '09, 02:42

mcZu wrote:Ortiz already buried this beat, lol.

But, you did a good job on it, nothing to special, you could have dropped some harder hitting punches, but it is good. Flow is dope, like it, delivery is good. Mixing sounds a bit strange, but, it's a dope freestyle/freeverse.

And you stopped yelling Tom Chambers? :o



^i know...he inspired me....but yea...i was just getting back into the flow......you know how you get when you stop for a few weeks....but yea i'ma get back to that punchline shit...good looks

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you killed that :y:
vicious flow Tom :worship:


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Re: I Go Off Freeverse

Postby Solace » Nov 22nd, '09, 03:03

Coool shit dude love it :worship:
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Re: I Go Off Freeverse

Postby Xray » Nov 22nd, '09, 07:45

Song was pretty nice overall, and your delivery sounded vicious, I think you doubled your verses? Anyways mixing sounded good, except for your adlibs should of turned them down abit. Outro was longer than your first verse homie, WAY too long.
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Re: I Go Off Freeverse

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 22nd, '09, 18:20

i loved it man ,, you inspire me ,, good shit ,, delivery is sick ,,,,,, mixing ,, is awesome , over all ,, nice,, song , keep it up
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Re: I Go Off Freeverse

Postby Le Tunisien » Nov 22nd, '09, 20:25

tom chambers is fucking dope :worship: :y: :y: :y:
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Re: I Go Off Freeverse

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Nov 22nd, '09, 21:12

heard this earlier today..has a nice vibe to it...as ray said you doubled it right? but gave a somthin nice to it.....as ray said again outro was a bit long
but the multies were nice.... :y: flow was on point :y:
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Re: I Go Off Freeverse

Postby B.A.D. » Nov 25th, '09, 01:53

"tell me....why would i listen to streets//
when the streets never ever really listen to me//"

I like that one

I don't like this beat too much, but you rode it well... good quality, good song

I like the style also, plus you got a diferent and angry flow wich is good... nothing else to say, but dope track... lookin forward for more

who you dissin btw??
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Re: I Go Off Freeverse

Postby EminemIVLife » Nov 29th, '09, 11:17

Tom Chambers is very dope indeed :y: :y: :y: :b: :b: :b:
I never touch these ho's at all/ fucking with them tramp ass sluts you supposed to fall
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Re: I Go Off Freeverse

Postby Vettori » Dec 5th, '09, 20:46

didnt expect this.. good shit man, kept on point, had some serious "swag" haha keep at that shit, hopin to hear some more..

btw check my shit drop some feed
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Re: I Go Off Freeverse

Postby Tash8 » Dec 5th, '09, 22:01

haha dope song man

good job...
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Re: I Go Off Freeverse

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 12th, '09, 23:13

fuckin sick dude :worship:
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Re: I Go Off Freeverse

Postby Tornado » Dec 12th, '09, 23:42

Sick little song, good comeback but i wanna hear you push yourself more, can't wait till more
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