Xray wrote:Your problem is you have no style. Your flow is nothing special and it doesn't have much rhythm to it. People are saying you whisper because you have no rhythm to your raps. If you had rhythm, then you'd have flow and you'd automatically sound much more comfortable with what your saying, making your delivery (tone of voice) more listenable. From there on you practice and master.
Good luck with it, but one things for sure, you are not Eminem. So don't even think about using Eminem concepts on your tracks, and the best way to do that is keep away from Eminem beats and think of you not Eminem. On this track, you used an Eminem beat along with an Eminem like concept, causing the listeners to think your jacking Eminems style, therefore original is what you need to be.
JBM wrote:Xray wrote:Your problem is you have no style. Your flow is nothing special and it doesn't have much rhythm to it. People are saying you whisper because you have no rhythm to your raps. If you had rhythm, then you'd have flow and you'd automatically sound much more comfortable with what your saying, making your delivery (tone of voice) more listenable. From there on you practice and master.
Good luck with it, but one things for sure, you are not Eminem. So don't even think about using Eminem concepts on your tracks, and the best way to do that is keep away from Eminem beats and think of you not Eminem. On this track, you used an Eminem beat along with an Eminem like concept, causing the listeners to think your jacking Eminems style, therefore original is what you need to be.
Care to elaborate on how it's a Eminem like concept? When i heard the instrumental i thought id give it a go, before even hearing the actual song (so i could avoid copying him at all).
Anyway thanks for your post and the advice.
JBM wrote:Xray wrote:Your problem is you have no style. Your flow is nothing special and it doesn't have much rhythm to it. People are saying you whisper because you have no rhythm to your raps. If you had rhythm, then you'd have flow and you'd automatically sound much more comfortable with what your saying, making your delivery (tone of voice) more listenable. From there on you practice and master.
Good luck with it, but one things for sure, you are not Eminem. So don't even think about using Eminem concepts on your tracks, and the best way to do that is keep away from Eminem beats and think of you not Eminem. On this track, you used an Eminem beat along with an Eminem like concept, causing the listeners to think your jacking Eminems style, therefore original is what you need to be.
Care to elaborate on how it's a Eminem like concept? When i heard the instrumental i thought id give it a go, before even hearing the actual song (so i could avoid copying him at all).
Anyway thanks for your post and the advice.
Adam Quinn wrote:I understand what you are doing and what you say in your rhymes. You gotta understand though that the people who come to this site don't listen to our type of music. I think your shit all around is better than anybody's on this site,.
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