Mr.Vewb - Im Crazy

[jba1me]

ok so this is the first song ive ever wrote and made the beat for. check it out and give me some feedback . Thanks http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9c04KX69VjQ

[_Ironic_]

yo i feel the need to say this to all new members:
make sure you check out and give feedback to other members. Nobody is gonna listen/give you feedback unless you do the same for them.

with that said cuz ur new I'll give you a free feedback and hope you return the favor.

beat is actually pretty nice? did u make that u said? if so good job man

quality is actually pretty bad cuz I heard the exact point when u turned the mic on..and it was a high frequency noise which is somewhat annoying...but until u get a better mic, and I know it's your first time so I'll leave it at that

actually it's amazing that it's your first song has punchin's and overlays..you're better off than quite a few others on this site.

some points the flow was okay, and then other times it was just god-awful...work on making your schemes connect better to give it a more enjoyable feel.

delivery was pretty bad, it felt monotone and unemotional..not feelin it

lyrics, I only like 1 line in the whole song, "fucked ur girl, told her to take the morning after" I lol'd..but other than that the flow of the whole track was off which made your lyrics downgrade.

overall I was impressed by the beat and ur use of overlays for a newbie..the overlays are really a hard part to learn for alot of others so u have an edge..if u keep workin on it..it'll become easier.

overall 6/10

I was gonna rate it way worse, but u impressed me a little. hahaha keep doin it and please remember to return the feed. enjoy TR SHADY.

[jba1me]

lol yea it would make sense i check out others so i will. thanks for the review and yea i did make the beat myself and it was actually the first beat ive ever made.