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Redzek - My Dad (1 verse)

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Redzek - My Dad (1 verse)

Postby Le Tunisien » Dec 23rd, '09, 17:20

didnt feel like finishing the song :(

http://www.zshare.net/audio/7027651743d866fb/


[Verse 1]
it all started,on nineteen ninety one
my dad tried sucide with an empty gun
he couldv left me alone,left our home
n i'd get the throne,hes such a Coward,oh
why the fuck??? would he do such thing
oh well next time he really must think
cuz if he doesnt his ship'll just sink
when i think about it now,im like wow
hes such a fuckin faggot and i cry how
could he leave my mom all the fuck alone
when he calls me i scream fuck the phone
n im gone outside chillin,homicide,killin
oh "now fill in", what? the divorce paper
my mom was crying but no remorse later,
it hurts to be a hater,to your own dad
it just feels sad,this pain is known bad

[Chorus]

if theres something you could tell me
well then tell me..that would help me
to get through what i been through
cause im so tired of you And...you !!
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Re: Redzek - My Dad (1 verse)

Postby randomghost » Dec 23rd, '09, 18:52

good choice of beat...flow is good..delivery could be better....lyrics is nice...i didnt like ur mixing and mastering....hook vocals are low...couldnt hear much :sweating: ..keep it up man...ur voice is gettin better :y:
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Re: Redzek - My Dad (1 verse)

Postby Le Tunisien » Dec 23rd, '09, 19:03

randomghost wrote:good choice of beat...flow is good..delivery could be better....lyrics is nice...i didnt like ur mixing and mastering....hook vocals are low...couldnt hear much :sweating: ..keep it up man...ur voice is gettin better :y:

thx for checking, man :happy: :flower:
and yeah im noob at mixing/mastering =/ !!err yeah i noticed the hook vocals are low yep!

still woring on it anyways, thx for ur time!! :worship:
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