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My Dream (Feat. Bar)

Postby Tash8 » Dec 22nd, '09, 23:40

hey guys, yeah new track..this isn't the studio quality that i had on memory lane but it still does the job..

enjoy! all feed and criticism is very much appreciated:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/70242756ea37af71/
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Re: My Dream (Feat. Bar)

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Dec 23rd, '09, 00:24

DAmm man i feeling this,,lyrics are niceee kinda deep beat rocks too
feeling the vibe on this flow seems to drop in a cuple of parts but other than that its nice
hook is cool too nice work :y:
As Of Right Now.....
Im Just Slowly Takin Over'


http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic. ... 8&t=102582
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Re: My Dream (Feat. Bar)

Postby Tash8 » Dec 23rd, '09, 01:50

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Re: My Dream (Feat. Bar)

Postby randomghost » Dec 23rd, '09, 10:33

damn beat is insane :y: am feeling ya verse tash...ya flow is good..delivery is good...but vocals are a bit higher than beat.. lower it a bit...hook is amazing..i like it..verse 2 is ma fav. lyrics is good..bars verse is good..flow is nice...lyrics is good..delivery is ok..not enough power 2 express...but still good...i like it...overall good track...keep it coming guys :y: ( btw da beat is amazing tash u produced it?)
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Re: My Dream (Feat. Bar)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Dec 23rd, '09, 10:38

delivery was good man!....just learn to control it a bit better...
flow fucks up towards the middle-end...intro has a weird mixing...doesnt appeal to me lol
delivery gets better in the 2nd verse..also i noticed the adlibs are well mixed (volume-wise)
i like the echo effect on bar's verse.....other than that its badly mixed :sweating:
but flow is there..so are the lyrics from both artists... :y: its an okay track...
for some reason i like the 3rd hook the most :unsure:
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Re: My Dream (Feat. Bar)

Postby Tash8 » Dec 23rd, '09, 10:55

thanks a lot guys.
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Re: My Dream (Feat. Bar)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 23rd, '09, 18:43

PINK wrote:That was awesome. I enjoyed listening to that. :flower:


Downloaded it. I don't think I listen to anything else , but TR artists as of late. :sweating:



thanks, and yeh i went through a stage like that my whole playlis was tr artists lol



and thanks for all the feedback guys :worship:
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Re: My Dream (Feat. Bar)

Postby Tash8 » Dec 24th, '09, 09:59

thx ppeeepz
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Re: My Dream (Feat. Bar)

Postby Tash8 » Dec 24th, '09, 21:43

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