Follow My Trail-Tom Chambers

[Mr. Chambers]

http://hulkshare.com/8xtoewh3zi1c

first time recording in a couple months lol.......

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[Solace]

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[DƎRDYPK]

this is not bad for your 1st recording in months
I can feel you cause I recorded my 1st song in forever yesterday

but this is dope...it sounds like one of your old tracks but with a new kind of emotion...
the lyrics = sick...very fitting to the beat...the hook is catchy & one of your best...
I can't think of anything else to say really cause this sounds pretty clean
the lines about your last mixtape were very interesting...
I agree with you that you could of done more on your last tape
but I wouldn't call what you did do a mistake...because it was still a pretty good tape in my opinion
if anything I see that your old work pushes you into coming back bigger & stronger for whatever you do next

& I like that...this is one of my favorite tracks from you without a doubt

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Hulkshare still pwns

[Mr. Chambers]

^good looks on the comment broski...wheres your song at?

[DƎRDYPK]

just finally put it up on TR
left the link of feedback leading to this thread

[Solace]

This is a great track, now the Hulkshare works lol. Definitely going to bump this for a while, this is what I want from you when you do a track like this. I love the ambient type of beat used, you did well over it. Smooth flow, and well used multies. No falters really. Well done hook, I remember on Super Chamber Bros when you tried singing it seemed that you didn't really know how you wanted to sound and it was like a trainwreck, and now you're on the right path. Keep it up. Great for being the first you've recorded in months too.

[Mr. Chambers]

good looks on the feedback.

[preest]

To be honest bro I love the overall sound of this track, its kind of got a sense of I dont give a fuck attitude at the same time as giving a fuck...if you get what I mean lol

I think the lyrics are dope and capture the feel of this track perfectly, the flow could be off at times in my opinion but its no big deal!! this tracks sick and you should be proud of it, keep recording bro I'm liking what I'm hearing

[mcZu]

The verse about your chick missing her flight is the best verse imo, well delivered. Flow was onpoint, although at some spots you slipped up, rushed in a couple of words to hit the correct instrument but by doing that it sounded far from smooth around those bars. Delivery was pretty good for this beat, suits it perfect.

I'd say polish up that flow and this will be a great song.

[Mr. Chambers]

^just a song to get my groove back...this was the first song i've done since that promo song for Suck it Bitch

[B.A.D.]

I'm not that fond of the beat really... I dont even think it fits the topic.

the flow is really really good man, and the lyrics are really good. what I like about this song is that you've shown a mature improvement, you've lost the additional cockyness and are focusing more on the message. this is great....
I love it man.

your last mixtape was a big mistake????..... I dont think so man.

I like the imagery too.

the mixing is good, but its not as clear as I've heard you.

nice one man

[classthe_king]

This was pretty good for being your first time recording. It started out good but then...stayed the same. It got kind of boring. You're basically the same rapper as when I first heard you on Super Chambers Bros. You need to find some way to evolve.

[Mr. Chambers]

^may i ask how i am still the same rapper from then? I don't mean that to sound cocky or anything, but i'd just like to know.

[classthe_king]

Well, you have the same quality as then, the same flow, the same delivery. You have some stand out points like the Don't Sign Me Intro or Birth of a Hero but lyrically you haven't progressed much either. If I posted a song like All of Me and then posted your Shadows song I don't think someone who doesn't listen to you would be able to tell which song was recent and which song was old.

[Solace]

I agree with Classthe_King about there being no artistic growth.