Sentus & Mc Anonymous- Collateral Damage

[classthe_king]

Download: http://usershare.net/1h5bmtik0hvu

Lyrics:

(Mc Anonymous)
Imma demon unleashed, the lucky beast
Begin to pull your intestines out your belly button and spread it across the fuckin' street
Get your body disposed, take a fire hose,
Tie it around your neck, turn on the water, watch your head explode
Support and see this is, a movement that geniuses
Can never see it's life like aborted fetuses
Report and see what is, fake and surrounded by your carelessness
You're very wack but we can carry this
I turn the sands of time to glass of eternity,
With the heat that I exude, if your ass hasn't heard of me
Get the fuck back nigga, as I past it with certainty
I'm the best there ever was, and I'm smashin' the verses, B
Don't got courtesy for people like you,
Sentus, let's let the fucking evilness through
Let the demons of hell, come and breathe in your shell
Let your whole fuckin' body twist and shiver wit yells
I aint playing around, Anon laying it down
Beast through, with the pen and I'm slaying it now
35 fucking wins, two losses, I'm crowned
There's enough fuckin' wins that I can toss some around, what!

(Sentus)
It's the pyromaniacs rippin with hot knives
Spittin at mach five till were hittin that top five
Go out with a bang, they won't play ya last jam
Your album only drops in the labels trash can
My flow is hot, you think you good but you know ya not
If you shook you'll be left flat like soda pop
When I flow on beats I'll scar any foe with ease
Put you in dirt like a curve ball below the knees
I rose to seize, spittin better than you ever can
I've never ran, never shook like a leper's hand
I'll sever ya funds with every breath in my lungs
Now your career is the square root of negative one
You're over takin my skill? Won't pull it off
Like a condom if your bitch ain't takin the pill
Till I'm makin a mill I'll spit till shaking him
Breaking him, you put the homo before sapien
With you I just sit back, and I still own the fight
You're beating yourself like a nerdy kid alone at night
It's the takeover; you won't have the outcome stopped
You only take charge when your album flops

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[WakeUpShow]

the beat is sooooo sick. Great flow both of you

[WakeUpShow]

who produced this?

[Codal]

Wow. That beat was really sick. Both of your flows where great.

[WakeUpShow]

who produced this?

i just said premo

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EuaRbBOJMMI

I was supposed to believe that DJ Premier produced a Sentus track? I don't listen to Canibus

[Robbie G]

I liked it. You definitely had some nice punches and the flow was solid throughout the track. Mc had a good verse too but his quality ruined the enjoyment for me.

[Terry_M]

I really enjoyed this track, only downside was MC Anonymous' quality but he had solid lyrics.

[mceddie]

amazing fucking track. 9/10

great flows, great lyrics, and great beat.

[mdemaz]

Yeah that sounded really pro. Mad Props to both of you.

[Ka0t1c]

nice liked both verses, sentus slightly more since i felt mc anon didn't start off well until the middle imo... but great drop and great collab

[remy3x]

Great track, guys.

[mcZu]

OK, I'm gonna be really honest here with you guys, because you two need constructive feed and not just praising words.

Anon, your flow was not good, very, very, very shaky. Delivery was messed up as well, I know your qaulity isn't good, but the way you pronounced certain words, and the way you rushed in words to make the flow hit the instruments does not sound good. Your diction was far from good, bro, really, your enunciation on this track sounds bad.

Sentus, your flow was better than Anon's, however, that doesn't mean that your flow was good, because your flow too just didn't work on this beat. It was very, very shaky. You tried to cramp in the words right before the instrument hits, but your flow sounded rushed due to that. Delivery was a lil' clearer than Anon's, but it wasn't good enough in terms of enunciation.

If I didn't have the lyrics, I would have had a real hard time following Anon's verse. I could follow Setus' verse pretty good.

Anon, work on your diction, this is a problem you have had for a while. You over enunciate a lot of words by screaming. Screaming isn't bad, but if you scream too hard your words won't come out the right way.

Sentus, work on your flow. Because I feel like you don't write properly to the beat, if you want your flow to be smooth you'll have to forget about text-structure (I think you already know that, but your verse still seems structured in a text-piece manner).

Lyrically it is good, I don't need to tell you two how to improve your writing, because you two are two of the best writers on these boards. But in terms of flow you both can improve your writing, and diction/enunciation should be improved as well.

Keep it up.

[Mr. Chambers]

^i kind of have to agree with zu. i think the speed anon was aiming for would be sick, but it sounded more rushed then a rapidfired flow. kind of disappointing cuz most of the other shit i heard from him was miles above this. Delivery was very nice tho, just needs better quality. He kind of reminds me of dizaster from grind time lol....lyrics were good tho.

class...your verse was ass cheek from the flow to the lyrics....sucked dick..






















no really












nah just fucking...thats payback for saying i ain't stepping up...
this is ok, but your previous works are better. You do still seem to be stuck in the text style, and overly focused on being "lyrical" you kinda need to start letting loose. You sound like your focusing too much on being this supreme underground artist, when you should be more focused on trying to be an artist. Fuck the labels of who's what and ect. i know your young, and i went through the same phase where i didn't want to be labeled as mainstream or sounding like so and so, but you need to grow out of it becuz your never going to advance staying in that underground lane. Becuz most underground artists all have the same downfall and that is they're too afraid to try something that might, even ever so slightly, make them seem like they ditching the underground. you, just like i did, will stop listening to underground rap as much and find it less entertaining. thats just being 100% honest.its how most people in our phase go about it. you'll either start listening to regular artists (i began listening to jay-z, joe budden, rakim, ect.) or you'll switch genre's all together. but sorry i'm ranting now lol. Just try to shake your mindstate up and i could see you being very good in the future.

[classthe_king]

Well I guess I was stuck in the text phase on this track cause I just pulled a verse from a couple months ago from my text days and rapped it to this beat lol. After I finish using those verses I've had saved up and I start writing new ones for specific beats hopefully my flow will get better. The 32 bars I wrote the other day hopefully has some really good flow. And Chambers, I'm just goona make music for me, I don't give a fuck what it sounds like, if I was trying to be a supreme underground artist I wouldn't have done an airplanes remix. I'm trying to be a supreme artist, just so happens I sound underground because underground is better than "regular rappers" (Jay-Z, Joe Budden, Rakim, ect)

[Slim Zaddy]

to be honest , i dont like the quality in it ,, it sounds , un pro to me,, mc fast rapping runed it for him,, flow can be much better,, but emotions were there,,

for class, wow , you have improved alot , i heard ya track with Xray ,, and there you were much better than here ,, as zu said,, write to the beat ,, cuz you lacked the flow, unlike MC,, but lyrically it was good , keeeeeep it up guys