aight listenin
the hook=perfect

great job
verses...ehh not so much, the first verse was just bad..im sorry just wasn't feelin it at all. the second verse was nicer delivery wise, lyrically this was pretty good, i guess it's ya delivery im not really feelin.
beat tags are UGLY...if this song was really on the radio, i don't know how u let that slide bro. buy the rights to any beat you use if you plan on using it commercially, take it from me cuz I know. radio will NOT play something on rotation that has ANY kind of copyright if u don't have the paperwork.
but yeah, the hook on this definitely made the song
hook: 9.5/10
verses: 5/10
hit my track up please, peace