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Scrubz - Walk Alone

Postby Scrubz » Jan 12th, '11, 02:06

Song for the haters. :smoking:
http://hulkshare.com/4389sr2fz0l8
Track for the upcoming mix tape, give me some feed back, i'l do the same. :y:
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Re: Srubz - Walk Alone

Postby Scrubz » Jan 12th, '11, 16:41

Feed god damn you! :'(
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Re: Srubz - Walk Alone

Postby Robbie G » Jan 12th, '11, 17:11

That was good man, I liked it.

Was it your beat?
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Re: Srubz - Walk Alone

Postby Scrubz » Jan 12th, '11, 19:32

Robbie G wrote:That was good man, I liked it.

Was it your beat?

Thank you and yes it was my beat. I update my soundclick atleast once a week so check it frequently for new one and the pm me ones u wanna use.
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Re: Srubz - Walk Alone

Postby WesTMusiK » Jan 12th, '11, 23:40

Damn, I'm feeling this song. I can't really think of a negative, haha.

Good shit, homie.
Emotions get the best of me, the thought of you stresses me
Love me and break me, that's the fuckin' recipe
So why do I miss you? I'm walking on these eggshells
Hoping for an answer and all I do is beg help
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Re: Srubz - Walk Alone

Postby Scrubz » Jan 13th, '11, 02:37

WesTMusiK wrote:Damn, I'm feeling this song. I can't really think of a negative, haha.

Good shit, homie.

Thanks alot man, it really means alot to hear this. On the flip side nothins perfect and that will be proven as soon as ironic gets his ass in here! Lol. Again thanks and if yu ever need a beat check my sig, it's got my soundclick URL, always down to produce and collab :y:
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Re: Srubz - Walk Alone

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jan 13th, '11, 06:39

this beat was a lil weird. i couldn't see myself using it, but you made it sound a lil better. i just think it was too busy.

chorus had potential. i liked the direction you wanted to take it, but it just didn't come out right. Needs to sound more fuller.

overall your flow was shakey in many spots, but it wasn't anything that made me cringe, jsut needs more practice. Lyrics were cool and i liked the message. So nothing much to complain on that front. Your delivery sounds kinda like spag lol. You got like a monotone, airy type of delivery. dunno if this will be a reoccurring thing but it wasn't bad for this track.
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Re: Srubz - Walk Alone

Postby Scrubz » Jan 13th, '11, 19:13

Mr. Chambers wrote:this beat was a lil weird. i couldn't see myself using it, but you made it sound a lil better. i just think it was too busy.

chorus had potential. i liked the direction you wanted to take it, but it just didn't come out right. Needs to sound more fuller.

overall your flow was shakey in many spots, but it wasn't anything that made me cringe, jsut needs more practice. Lyrics were cool and i liked the message. So nothing much to complain on that front. Your delivery sounds kinda like spag lol. You got like a monotone, airy type of delivery. dunno if this will be a reoccurring thing but it wasn't bad for this track.

Thanks bro, will take the cunstructive criticism and step it up al level, always improving.
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Re: Srubz - Walk Alone

Postby classthe_king » Jan 14th, '11, 00:54

I really liked this song man. It had a really nice feel to it. I would make it a little louder though, it sounded kinda soft to me. I liked the message too, this is probably the best song I've ever heard from you, keep at it.
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Re: Srubz - Walk Alone

Postby Scrubz » Jan 14th, '11, 02:37

classthe_king wrote:I really liked this song man. It had a really nice feel to it. I would make it a little louder though, it sounded kinda soft to me. I liked the message too, this is probably the best song I've ever heard from you, keep at it.

Lyrics louder? its tough because obviously i know the words by hart so i have no prob hearing them but this helps! thanks for the feed, il be sure to feed yours :y: hopfuly we can colab on the shady mix tape, if there ever is one lol. :whistle:
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Re: Srubz - Walk Alone

Postby JBM » Jan 14th, '11, 02:50

Nice song. Flow was good and Chorus was too. Decent lyrics. Hard to find something constructive.
It's a good song.
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Re: Srubz - Walk Alone

Postby Scrubz » Jan 14th, '11, 03:23

JBM wrote:Nice song. Flow was good and Chorus was too. Decent lyrics. Hard to find something constructive.
It's a good song.

Good looks brotha man! i feed your shit aswell. :smoking:
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Re: Srubz - Walk Alone

Postby preest » Jan 15th, '11, 14:53

I like the quality of the rapping, I wasnt really feeling the chorus, I kinda felt that you had maybe a little trouble holding the notes?? its a nice track with a nice feel to it though so it dosent really matter about the hook!! keep it up bro :y:
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Re: Srubz - Walk Alone

Postby Scrubz » Jan 15th, '11, 16:26

preest wrote:I like the quality of the rapping, I wasnt really feeling the chorus, I kinda felt that you had maybe a little trouble holding the notes?? its a nice track with a nice feel to it though so it dosent really matter about the hook!! keep it up bro :y:

Yeah dude I can't fuckin single lol. I tried because that Bridge to the chorus was very quite so I figured I needed to do something along those lines. Best I could do/have doNe but will continue to work on it. Thanks for the feed and I will feed for u when I get a chance.
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Re: Srubz - Walk Alone

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 17th, '11, 01:19

Great beat man, if you produced it, you have a nice style? may I ask what program are you using, cuz that sounds like NO Fl studio or Reason.... maybe Logic Pro??

you got the ability for the lyrics, creativity and flow... however you need to fix up a couple things, like your voice, needs emotion man. you sound semi-whisper, need to give it all, dont be shy, improve that man. Also, the singed part, need to tune up man hahaha, u sound a bit off note.

I love the whole concept of the track, and you kept it really nice. your mixing is clean, but maybe too dry, try to experiment a bit more. as well on the beat.

great thang man :y: :y:
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