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tash - let go

Postby Tash8 » Jan 23rd, '11, 07:37

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Re: tash - let go

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 23rd, '11, 15:03

get yah ass on msn once in a while eh man ?


nice track though, not your best just coz most of your best are this same sort of vibe and i would like to hear different style from you.

but your solid at this type of track and this is another great example of that.
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Re: tash - let go

Postby classthe_king » Jan 23rd, '11, 16:56

Pretty cool song. Only criticism I have is in the chorus when you have the two different voices going one of this is way to quiet. I could barely hear it without putting my ear to the speaker and listening closely. I think the melody of the chorus was awesome if you just turned the volume up on that it would have been good. The rest of the song was solid, not really a song I would listen to but that's just me.
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Re: tash - let go

Postby Tash8 » Jan 23rd, '11, 18:39

thx guys
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Re: tash - let go

Postby Emadyville » Jan 24th, '11, 06:31

The concept and execution of it were done perfectly.

Lyrics in the first verse were dope, flow was on point and the delivery was fitting with the laid back/sad sorta feel. Second verse, the carnival-clown-merry go round shit was nice, loved the rhymes "backwards, adverse, catch words" it was dope and the lyrics with it were real. Also loved the bridge, that was mixed really well and sounded really cool.

The hook was dope, I agree with class that might be a little low, when I heard it before and now it's on my laptop, so it doesn't sound too low, I shoulda listened with headphones. Mixing and overs were on point, like I said delivery and flow were nice, loved the concept and lyrics bro.

This is definitely my second fav song from you behind impossible, but this is a very close second, great work :worship:
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Re: tash - let go

Postby Phantom » Jan 24th, '11, 11:51

really like the concept behind this song man. love the beat. i like how you have a laidback feel to your voice yet you still have emotion. you tend to drop out in the middle of bars though. hook is very nice. this is an extremely uplifting song man, like it alot no doubt
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Re: tash - let go

Postby Tash8 » Jan 24th, '11, 22:48

thanks a lot guys for the feed...

phantom, homie, i know what u mean by dropping in between the bars.. I have the tendency to move into the mic then out of the mic...gotta stop that shit :flower:
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Postby Scrubz » Jan 24th, '11, 23:23

classthe_king wrote:Pretty cool song. Only criticism I have is in the chorus when you have the two different voices going one of this is way to quiet. I could barely hear it without putting my ear to the speaker and listening closely. I think the melody of the chorus was awesome if you just turned the volume up on that it would have been good. The rest of the song was solid, not really a song I would listen to but that's just me.

This, no point in repeating it cuz this basically what u was gonna say word for word. Lyrically your there just work on mixing. Solid track 8/10 keep at it.

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Re: tash - let go

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 25th, '11, 02:32

lmao, what was that at the beggining? "hu huh uh huh"? lol

the flow is improving big time man, same as quality, you still have that problem with the volume, you need to have it way louder man, I think Im gonna blame it on your headphones, cuz its always the same, so u should change them haha.

the concept is great man, I love how you approach this, and with the flow, specially in the second verse, I love it man. the hook as well is good, its a shame it was too low, but its def. good :y:

good job man, very interesting track.

did you produced it?
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Re: tash - let go

Postby Tash8 » Jan 25th, '11, 06:45

Big Ax-D wrote:lmao, what was that at the beggining? "hu huh uh huh"? lol

the flow is improving big time man, same as quality, you still have that problem with the volume, you need to have it way louder man, I think Im gonna blame it on your headphones, cuz its always the same, so u should change them haha.

the concept is great man, I love how you approach this, and with the flow, specially in the second verse, I love it man. the hook as well is good, its a shame it was too low, but its def. good :y:

good job man, very interesting track.

did you produced it?


no, i did not. thanks a bunch for the feed. and it might be the headphones, i usually mix thru headphones which is not the greatest idea, unless their studio quality headphones...and yeah...but either way i'll fix the volume stuff real quick

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Re: tash - let go

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jan 25th, '11, 16:47

it was ok. your delivery is kinda slipping. its all fairly monotone considering what type of track this is. Especially the chorus. You coulda did some nice "screaming" dubs to make it more of a party track.
flow was cool. lyrics were ok.


it was a cool song overall. kind of a step back from your previous works, but just a baby step.
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Re: tash - let go

Postby Tash8 » Jan 25th, '11, 17:03

Mr. Chambers wrote:it was ok. your delivery is kinda slipping. its all fairly monotone considering what type of track this is. Especially the chorus. You coulda did some nice "screaming" dubs to make it more of a party track.
flow was cool. lyrics were ok.


it was a cool song overall. kind of a step back from your previous works, but just a baby step.


thx man, though it wasnt a party track, the track had a lot more substance than that...
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Re: tash - let go

Postby HipHopHead » Jan 26th, '11, 19:02

I thought the quality was great. Your delivery was a bit too lifeless for this type of track I thought though. I agree with Chambers on the screaming overdubs. Flow was solid. Lyrics were alright. Turn up the chorus vocals like other people said. I'm looking forward to hearing something with content from you. Keep it up. :b:
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Re: tash - let go

Postby Tash8 » Jan 27th, '11, 09:01

HipHopHead wrote: I'm looking forward to hearing something with content from you. Keep it up. :b:


excuse me? how does this not have content?

thx for the feed.
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Re: tash - let go

Postby Poison Ivy » Jan 27th, '11, 22:06

Really great song, you had a good flow on this track 10/10 keep up the good work.
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