Vettori & Sincere & Tony- When Your Not There.

[Vettori]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/87031614dd7f0aa9/

Now Just so everybody knows, Iv'e never in my life attempted a song about a girl. where i had nice things to say..so lol With that being said Warning...This is a Chick song.

I'm First verse & Chorus (note) I fucked up the mixing at one point thats very noticable but its only on my verse.

Sincere he's been rapping a while now so he's got some experience.

& Tony (the third verse) Has only recorded 4-6 songs but he holds his own.

I'll drop a few songs they've done another time...

Again mind the fact its a love song

try to judge it for what its about.

No homo.




PS: Ive left a ton of feedback just check the last like 9 posts. LOL

[Wallace]

Overall it was cool

Nice choice of beat

Only thing that could make it better was if yall changed the flow drastically from one verse to another.

[Vettori]

Thanks Ill take that into mind next time we make a song.

[dR3]

Sorry, not my cup of tea. Too soft for me.

You had a more than decent verse tho.

[Vettori]

haha ye this is for sure a differant crowd....but ive never touched down on This subject so i thought id go for it... Thx for checking

[xnoxiousx]

It was good. It was just to slow and soft for me as well.

But dont change for us and try make all hard songs now if your good at the slower soft music there are people who like that.

[Vettori]

haha i get you. Thanks for checking. I like mixing it up...I know i cant drop another like that for a bit still... Haha I need to make it random.

[xnoxiousx]

haha i get you. Thanks for checking. I like mixing it up...I know i cant drop another like that for a bit still... Haha I need to make it random.

You seem to have some talent and are good from what i heard at least you could be make it.

I cant say same for all these kids who post songs thinking there actually good and suck.

[Vettori]

Thank you Very much.
these comments make me get better

[Tash8]

ok this was dope, raw as fuck, at least your parts.. the other guys seemed a lil bit new and not quite perfect, thought ur verse was nice, loved the lyrics.. "your body was a planet i've yet to explore" or something like that, anyways hook was cool, could have been a bit better, liked the singing part the other part was just aite.

To the people saying this is "soft," you guys crazy? Why is this soft? Maybe you guys have never been in a relationship before

[Mc Cubz]

vettori man this is sick man - better than so much mainstream! get your mixtape(s) and let the world know!

[Vettori]

Ty man, from my heart

[Tranquil]

Its always good to expand and experiment with different kind of songs, and i have to say that this is a pretty good song. I could kinda tell about the mixing mess up, but it didn't ruin it for me or anything like that.

Overall you had the best verse outta the other two, the other two kind of sound new but they still held it up. I liked the hook aswell, i liked the kinda slow feel to the track, and you tackled it well.

4.5/5

[Jay Tunes]

your voice is dope as shit as hell, did i say that before? (1st verse right)


1st verse - dope voice, dope flow, nice lyrics, mastering problems didnt seem that bad 4/5

2nd verse - nice verse, flow was nice but if he was rapping for a minute he shouldve ripped it, still good tho

3rd verse - lyrics were not bad, flow was a lil off at points tho, and quality was the worse of the 3 (still good quality 8 outta 10)

Hook - was real nice, couldve stand out a LIL more. but it was fine, better than any of my hooks lmao.

other - all ya voices sound somewhat alike but i feel like Vettori (1st verse) had a a chill flow yet good delivery


good song bro #keepitup

[B.A.D.]

the beat choice is good, I like it man, very chill.
I love your structure and the way you organized your rhymes, strong lyrical ability. I didnt like the hook tho', its extremely predictable, and kinda empty. you sing pretti good but there's no creativity in it.
the second guy was my favourite, very relaxed, seemed like he know what his doing, and love what he's doing. really good verse... its sincere lol... ain't that something? lmao
the third dude, it really looks like he's using a recycled verse, that shit was written for another beat. you can see it on the way he flows, doesnt sound comfortable.

I checked this song some time ago but was kind of in a rush to add it or not to the big list, and its my fav of the one's you have dropped recently.
there's really nothing to feed, you guys know what you are doing and apart from quality everything its there. But you still need to do like Sincere, let the beat guide you, don't guide the beat. feel comfortable on it, relax yourself a bit u know what I mean?

very dope song, and its good that you came back. Keep in touch man