JBM - UNSTOPPABLE

[JBM]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=26zr7ZZF7YQ

Feed:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=109030&p=1540166#p1540166

[Scrubz]

I liked this alot, very catchy. The beat was hot. Your flow was nearly perfect, a few hick ups. Rhyming was kinda basic but good none the less. Nothin to complain about, good shit homie.

[B.A.D.]

oh, yeah sounds better.

I like what you did with the layovers, good idea the echoey. it doesnt seem like you fixed the reverb but does sounds better quality wise, may be beacuse you added something else.

better man, I like it

[Tranquil]

This was good man

The flow was a little off at the start, but you slowly picked it up

See you can hate to love it or
Choose to love to hate it

i liked that

Overall this is a pre solid track man, 4/5

Ill be looking out for more stuff in the future

[Mr. Chambers]

ok
the flow was pretty solid. there were times when you dragged syllables out to hit right. But i personally didn't have a problem with it. the delivery, i had mixed emotions on cuz it was almost like a balance of an amp'd beat with a calm delivery, BUT i did feel the beat took more of the spotlight on this track over your vocals. You need to find a happy medium of your style of delivery and the beat.

lyrics were cool. nothing amazing, but i also realized you keep it extremely basic. maybe 2 syllable rhyming, and that in all honesty kept me uninterested. There are people i listen to who don't always multi fill it up, but its becuz they have something raw or different about their lyrics or style. And it just don't seem like you found your lane yet.

for what it is tho, the chorus was pretty good.

overall it was a solid song. soo good job. How long you been rapping for?

[JBM]

Thanks for the feed guys.. appreciate it.

[Jay Tunes]

i liked this, hook was good.. it's really good to do our own hooks, i think its the hardest part, IIII cant make real good hooks, but this one was nice.

lyrics were okay.... i think a few more punchlines wouldve been nice
flow was weak at first, but you picked it up later, some bumps here and there but it was good

....also i hear an accent? UK?
and please step that song cover game up, please

#keepitup

[JBM]

i liked this, hook was good.. it's really good to do our own hooks, i think its the hardest part, IIII cant make real good hooks, but this one was nice.

lyrics were okay.... i think a few more punchlines wouldve been nice
flow was weak at first, but you picked it up later, some bumps here and there but it was good

....also i hear an accent? UK?
and please step that song cover game up, please

#keepitup

Thanks for the feed. I don't really do covers just put up a random pic.
Your right about hooks, they are the nucleus of a song. I don't worry about verses until im happy with a hook.
Oh and it's a NZ accent.

[Block]

This is the guy that tried to tell me, "English can't be your first language"?

sounds like someone taped your tongue to the roof of your mouth... C'mon now...


What is this amateur hour shit?

[JBM]

Thanks for bumping my shit.

[Block]

Thanks for bumping my shit.

Most recent song I found of yours that was solo. And it's terrible enough to deserve a bump just to laugh at it.


Definitely worth the warning I got for it.

[JBM]

I'm glad you got some amusement out of it.

Now go back to making songs about people on the internet..

[Block]

I'm glad you got some amusement out of it.

Now go back to making songs about people on the internet..

You mean like this?:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=110115&hilit=talk+is+cheap

The same song that was put on a 'mixtape' and was directed toward me?


Your boyfriend started this whole ordeal and that is your response? You're obviously only going to type shit, because let's face it... You.. Me? No comparison.

[JBM]

Honestly man you are wasting your time tryna start something with me. I don't care enough.

I gave you my opinion on your song and yes i think scrubz is better.
My boyfriend? cmon grow up. I don't know either of you personally.

[Block]

Honestly man you are wasting your time tryna start something with me. I don't care enough.

I gave you my opinion on your song and yes i think scrubz is better.
My boyfriend? cmon grow up. I don't know either of you personally.

So you make music but use the excuse "I don't care"? That's the cop out that every horrible wannabe uses when they know how terrible they are, but don't want to admit it...