MahMooD- Hello

[Mahmoud48]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3k4NSXNSSg
i like the 1st verse the rest seems ass imo

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[Solace]

I liked the Forever one better.

You've at least got a good potential in delivery. Lol@you saying n.iggaz.

[Mahmoud48]

I liked the Forever one better.

You've at least got a good potential in delivery. Lol@you saying n.iggaz.

i say it all the time in my school
and its a black ass school
i dont mean to offend anyone

[Solace]

True alright, and you should record with mic and shit instead of webcam recording.

[Block]

Watching this makes me want to hang myself. I was planning my escape as the video progressed. When it ended I realized it was just a terrible nightmare of a soft, Muslim wannabe-gangster-rapper and I laughed at the irony.

Let's be real, you don't say 'niqqas' in school. You'd get your turban turned inside out.

[Mahmoud48]

Watching this makes me want to hang myself. I was planning my escape as the video progressed. When it ended I realized it was just a terrible nightmare of a soft, Muslim wannabe-gangster-rapper and I laughed at the irony.

Let's be real, you don't say 'niqqas' in school. You'd get your turban turned inside out.

i do but w/e, u don't know me so u cant really judge.
i respect your opinion if u don't like it but racist insults are childish
and it doesn't matter what my skin color or religion, rap is an art form and that's how I'm looking at it
i don't wanna be no gangster my life is to good for that

[Block]

Watching this makes me want to hang myself. I was planning my escape as the video progressed. When it ended I realized it was just a terrible nightmare of a soft, Muslim wannabe-gangster-rapper and I laughed at the irony.

Let's be real, you don't say 'niqqas' in school. You'd get your turban turned inside out.

i do but w/e, u don't know me so u cant really judge.
i respect your opinion if u don't like it but racist insults are childish
and it doesn't matter what my skin color or religion, rap is an art form and that's how I'm looking at it
i don't wanna be no gangster my life is to good for that

LOL. C'mon kid, I don't need to know you on a personal level to know you're bluffing. I mean, look at you... Just look in the mirror. Any self respecting black man would backhand you for saying the N word.

So you don't wanna be "gangster", you just "rap to the streets"??? Am I understanding this correctly?


In other words, you idolize gangster rap, try to rap gangster and then claim you don't want to be gangster because your life is too good for that?


Jesus Christ. You're the epitome of ridiculous.

and FYI: Mentioning Muslims isn't racist. Muslims are not a race, dumb ass.

[Mahmoud48]

Watching this makes me want to hang myself. I was planning my escape as the video progressed. When it ended I realized it was just a terrible nightmare of a soft, Muslim wannabe-gangster-rapper and I laughed at the irony.

Let's be real, you don't say 'niqqas' in school. You'd get your turban turned inside out.

i do but w/e, u don't know me so u cant really judge.
i respect your opinion if u don't like it but racist insults are childish
and it doesn't matter what my skin color or religion, rap is an art form and that's how I'm looking at it
i don't wanna be no gangster my life is to good for that

LOL. C'mon kid, I don't need to know you on a personal level to know you're bluffing. I mean, look at you... Just look in the mirror. Any self respecting black man would backhand you for saying the N word.

So you don't wanna be "gangster", you just "rap to the streets"??? Am I understanding this correctly?


In other words, you idolize gangster rap, try to rap gangster and then claim you don't want to be gangster because your life is too good for that?


Jesus Christ. You're the epitome of ridiculous.

and FYI: Mentioning Muslims isn't racist. Muslims are not a race, dumb ass.

i know how i look it doesnt matter
u dont know me though, u never chiilled with me
u dont know how i act how the hell can u judge me by my looks
nah i aint gonna explain shit idc ill use any word i wanna use

[iain08]

When you were saying "hello!" from like :58 to 1:10, I laughed so hard.

[Block]

How about you quit being a dick about?

What makes you think he is a wanna-be gangster? Because he said the N word? Fuck outta here. You don't know the fuckin kid, so if he says he's said the N word at school, then he probably has. I know there were scrawny white/brown kids in my school who used to say it. No one would go on the fuckin Internet to say they've said the N word, that's faggoty, kinda like how you're picking on him.

And in the context you used "Muslim", it comes off as offensive. What importance does his religion pertain to the insults you're barraging him with? Seriously man, it's fuckin gay. It's a shame the song wasn't a minute longer for you to hang yourself.


Anyways, man, you should use a mic and record....preferably when no kids are in the room.

Really, bro? Really? Did you even pay attention to his attrocious lyrics? "I speak to the streets" LOLOLOL. This child is the furthest thing from 'speaking to the streets'. Unless by 'speaking to the streets' he means, "When my lips hit the pavement after getting the shit kicked out of me for saying n.iggers"

AND LOL@ Calling a spade a spade is offensive? Since when? Calling him a soft muslim wannabe gangster rapper is somehow offensive? I wasn't aware of that. Quite trying, dude. The kid's a fucking joke. Listen to his garbage lyrics then come at me.


Quit fucking white knighting. You're not an internet superhero, quit trying to be. I called the dude out for being ridiculous. Leave it at that and jump back on your horse and ride off into the sunset.

[B.A.D.]

Every building starts from the ground up.

exactly

[Block]

Since when is the audio stage about blatant disrespect? No matter how mediocre a song may be, the person has the guts to put their shit up for it to be properly critiqued, not slain with insults. No matter what. He should expect the bad critiques, but in proper form not, "I wanna kill myself after hearing your shit bro".

Every building starts from the ground up.

Yeah, it actually is presented in a offensive way because you use it as the foundation of the following insults you threw at him. You wack-ass Christian rapper fuck. Wouldn't that be the same difference considering it's just a true statement beside insults? It's used derogatorily as opposed to complimentary.

I ain't gonna be so white after I'm matted with your blood when I'm finished cutting your head off - now that's gangsta

Really though? Internet hero? I'm doing what you did, you called him out (on nothing he ever claimed to be) so I'm just shoving the same dildo up your ass Do you like the vibrator on or off?

Honestly, if he can't take insults on a forum (well, rather YOU can't) then he shouldn't post anything. Especially RAP. Rap is based off insulting people (battling). And for fucks sake, this is an EMINEM FORUM. He made his entire career off from insulting people. C'mon, now. Since when did everyone become such pussies? Surely if he can troll every other forum, his thread isn't off limits just because it's in the audio section. Fuck no, that's just more material to troll HIM with.

Let the kid fight his own fights. You don't have to try and save the day everytime there's a damzel in distress.

If he can troll everyone in every other forum he can expect the same in return; Regardless of which forum it's in. The kid is a fucking tool. Seriously. Just look at him.

[Block]

Pretty sure if you called him a wack ass motherfucker who should hang the mic and than himself, he wouldn't be that offended. All I'm saying is that the way you dropped the word "Muslim" was wrong.

I don't care if it wasn't a diss or not, it wasn't anything complimentary. It was needless.

Rap battles are meant for personal attacks.

Just...fuck it I'm not gonna waste my time. Your character, or lack thereof, glistened brightly with the things you said and for trying to find a reasonable solution as to why you said them

Selective responses are awesome. You obviously didn't read my whole post; Or you did and chose not to respond to the parts that actually mattered.

I'm an asshole. I've never denied that to anyone. What's your point? I don't try to be politically correct. I couldn't give a shit what anyone thinks of what I say. This kid's a fucktard. He posts the most irrelevant, ridiculous bullshit in everyone's threads. But you try to save the day in his? C'mon, get a grip.

Who cares if I mentioned him being muslim? You're reaching for something to hang me for and it's not working. I didn't mention anything derogatory toward muslims. I simply stated it as part of his character traits. Is that somehow illegal? Again, we go back to calling a spade a spade. It is what it is.


I'll reiterate what I said in a previous post: THIS IS AN EMINEM FORUM. The most controversial rapper to ever make it. And you're trying to tell me to be politically correct?

Quit while you're ahead, bro. I have nothing against you but you're seriously reaching for something to argue with me about. The kid is half a speech impediment away from sounding like daffy duck for the rest of his life.

[Xray]

^^No offense dude but talking about his voice? Dude you sounded so retarded when you first started rapping AND you had a MAD lisp, that's just how it is. Everyone sounds fucking garbage when they first start. I used to say the N word in ALL my freestyles before I started recording, because I used to think I'm a little hard motherfucking gangster rapper that no one can mess with. Shit I still think I'm a hard motherfucker that no one can mess with, minus the gangster bit.

Menzo you're the shit man. Mahmood, you're such a dumb ass bro, why post shit like this? It took me months after recording to actually get some balls to post my songs for feedback, cause I was honestly embarrassed. So should you. You're just bringing the kind of hate that you just don't need in your early stages, otherwise you're gonna get stage-fright and prolly never record again...use your head.

[CorrosionCover]

Come on he just had some fun and wanted a bit of feedback to improve himself....

I really doubt he wanted to be gangsta lol.... this was all messy and half-freestyled so he was rapping whatever came to his mind, and the word "nigga" was propably meaning "fella" not racist shit or sth like that.

Yeah this wasn't pro, but it wasn't that bad either. In the beggining it's a challange to get yourself sound good even with a mic, not to mention webcam mic.

Stop hate, you're not Slim Shady by this people.