Scrubz - S.C.R.U.B.Z (UPDATED!)

[Scrubz]

UPDATED LINK! RERECORDED VERSE, WITH MINOR LYRIC CHANGES AND IMPROVED FLOW. ALSO BETTER PLACEMENT ON THE HOOK .

What up ladies and gents, Finally my first ep is near its completion! Self description will drop 4/19!!! I've scrapped many tapes and attempt's at an e.p but i've finally put together something I am proud of. Anyways here's the first single to hopfuly stir up some buzz! Track is called S.C.R.U.B.Z, catchy track describing your's truly. Filled with puns, punchlines, and a little bit of humor.



DL: http://hulkshare.com/y03sehzfy0p8
Reverb(should be up soon): http://www.reverbnation.com/travisblakeslee
Link of feed: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=110360

LYRICS:

(INTRO)

(VERSER 1)

Here comes another white rapper in this game, whats new
Nobody's gonna listen to em, yeah well fuck you
aint nobody got the gal or guts to crush you
or cuss you - no hesitation to rush you
So Listen whats up dude these haters gotta get it
like they stole something, beat em till the dont forget it
this kinetic anesthetic in other words, my back hand
got you bitched slapped i switch back, and clap hands
and i can rap man deliver deliberately
these punchlines fam the come and they go as they please
I'm so sick with it say that i got a disease
ah jeeze I can feel it comin over me
flames start spitin out, hearts start rippin out
fueled by emotion got me goin man i'm flippin out
yeah i'll flippin shout, till a flippin lung come out
either that or breathless thats for you to figure out

(Hook)

I aint in it for the fame i aint in it for the money
i aint in it for the pussy or the broads or the hunnies
i aint in it for the 15 minutes of fame,
but when you think of the game you'll remember the name
(cuz it's the) S to the C to the R-U-B-Z
Scrubz man it roll's off the tongue so E-Z
so easy sky's will never reach me
i'm forever high and I am never peakin

(Verse 2)

I'm the shit you the parasite crawlin in it
You just feedin off me doesn't matter how you spin it
charlie sheen-in it bitch you know i'm into win it
finish off these other cats bound to drop at any minute
I dont mean to gloat, I dont mean to brag
Shit is grocery, I got it in the bag
All I hear is blah blah let me get the gag
betta yet I'll leave you pussies bleedin like you on the rag
this is for the fags who said that I was gonna be
just wanna be now you try befriendin me
cuz you see the cake but you aint gettin a crumb from me
if you got a thing for nuts you can get some of these
came in like a dog hungry lookin for meat
fuck stepin on your toe's imma bite off ya feet
imma, skeet skeet alll over the street
so you know im commin down on any hood beneath


(Hook)

I aint in it for the fame i aint in it for the money
i aint in it for the pussy or the broads or the hunnies
i aint in it for the 15 minutes of fame,
but when you think of the game you'll remember the name
(cuz it's the) S to the C to the R-U-B-Z
Scrubz man it roll's off the tongue so E-Z
so easy sky's will never reach me
i'm forever high and I am never peakin

ALBUM INFO:
Self Description; executive producer: Scrubz of TGBProductionz
Dropping 4/19
I will be dropping another single the week of 4/10 along with the cover art and track list. Album will be free and can either be herd on Reverb or a DL RAR.
Thank you in advance to all who comment and listen, cannot show enough gratitude.

[Static]

Wow, that was awesome! Some really great lines in there! Your voice is awesome, and your flow is great! The hook was actually pretty catchy too! This is something I could sit and listen too! My only complaint is that I think your voice was a bit to low compared to the beat, but that's nit-picking! Great job dude, keep it up!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

wait u produced that track?..
umm...im not sure about ur flow...u carried on with a good flow for two lines..then switched to a totally awful flow...example, the middle part in your 1st verse when u kept extending the ryhmes

and i can rap man deliver deliberately
these punchlines fam the come and they go as they please
I'm so sick with it say that i got a disease
ah jeeze I can feel it comin over me

didnt like that part...and ur 2nd verse was all over the place aswell..i dont know...its kool to switch up flows in a verse but then you should be able to find back...show some type of consitent flow again..
you know what i mean..no hate implied
i can see major potential in ur tracks...so im just tryna help...
quality was fine as hell again...delivery was kool too...very controlled to me..
hook was mixed very well...especially with the echo effect on one layer i guess..
keep doin what ya do..i make sure to peep ur EP once its out...

[B.A.D.]

hmm the flow is not very good, you need to perfect that man, make it flow smoother, seems like if you had a bit of lag when you recorded, cuz everything sounds out of time logarithmically instead of flaw-full rapping. so you might want to check it out. specially on the hook, like if you start half a second late each line. And goes on through the entire track, makes it seem not smooth, u have to perfect that.

I liked the lyrics, a lil basic, but since you need a broader audience to listen to it, I guess its ok.

the best thing by far was the beat, great production there, also the mixing in general was great.

yeah, cool song, good job man, work on the flow

[Scrubz]

@static: Thanks dude im glad you liked it Preciate the feed and advice.

@chris: I know what you mean bout switching up the flows, honestly i didnt see that much of a drastic change, but hey to each his own. And the part u quote u quoted was my fav/best multi's in the song lmao. thanks for the advice, cant really apply it to this song but will deff on my future work.

@ax: thanks for the feed, there wasn't lag, checked it, hit where i wanted it to for the most part bar some slip ups. I guess it want that nice of a flow to you, maybe a little choppy? idk. None the less i will continue to wrok on this. This was written about A month ago so it really doesnt show much growth on my end yah know?

[B.A.D.]

you could re-record it before putting it on the album if you are considering distribuiton

[Block]

Get on my level. Peep my awards son.. Get at me.

[Scrubz]

Get on my level. Peep my awards son.. Get at me.

Lol, you made out good at the awards.

[Mr. Chambers]

ok chorus was terrible tbh. it was very all over the place and nothing catchy about it.

first verse was ok. the flow was off here and there, but like the last 6 bars on it was pretty dope. but overall just an average verse. i liked your delivery tho. its pretty unique.

ouch you didn't line the chorus up right with the beat....

2nd verse was much better. flow was overall solid on this, with some dope moments in it, lyrics were more intriguing and kept my interest. i think if you redid the 1st verse and did a new chorus this track would be pretty sick.

[Instant Legend]

this is pretty dope homie, i love the rock vibe of the beat, im a sucker for that "crossover" type of feel, you're comin with a pretty solid delivery, theres somethin very unique about it, and im diggin that

good shit, i added you on reverbnation

[Tornado]

Flow was over the place, sometimes smoother than a baby's behind, other times it got jagged. Chorus wasn't catchy, and it did sound off, maybe cos of the mixing. Mixing was alright although i feel you're lacking a bit of low end EQ. sounded alright, nothing special but there's potential for improvement.

[Tranquil]

I liked this track, its like a pre good introduction kinda track. The beat is pre good, different but good. The flow is okay, a little choppy but listenable. The lyrics are a lil basic, try throwing some multi's in there and shit. There was a line that i didn't particularly like cause its over played to the MAX! but its cool. Overall this track is aight, ill still be looking out for the EP man

[preest]

I like this track, I like hearing people that put echoes and stuff in to compliment they're vocals it shows they're thinking more as an artist than just a rhymer! There was a couple of time's I thought maybe it could have flowed a little better and also the chorus got a bit annoying by the end but in all it was a decent track not bad lyrically and the flow was on point 99% of the time, keep doing what your doing bro cos it was enjoyable to listen to

[Scrubz]

Chambers: thanks for your opinion, you have I trust your judgment cuz ur very honest. I will rerecord the first verse but I'm just gonna leave the hook, maybe try to mix it better. I would prefect it but I'm runnin outta time. Whit drops 4/19, I will aPply all the feed toward my next project. Thanks again man, it helps.

Instant legend: thanks bro, it's good to hear some dope new comers. I added you on reverb as well. Look out for my ep dropping on 4/19. I will continue to check ur stuff so keep droppin.

Tornado: thanks for being honest, I appreciate it! And the consensus is that the hook was not very good so I rest your opinion. The intro hook was ment to be "off" compared to the real hook. But I think y'all liked the intro one better.

Eminemislegend: thanks bro, glad it was "listenable" lmao. But that was the purpose of this track, just to introduce. I didn't choose it to be a single because it was great because honestly it's not, but cuz it was pretty generic and describes me. I will re record the first verse to try to pull the flow together tho. And yes keep your eye out for the ep, have some good tracks on it!

Preest: glad you enjoyed it cuz I really enjoy your work so again, another great opinion. Yeah hook was blah, I noticed the slips in the flow, gonna rerecord the first verse. Glad you like the mixing as well, deff feel it's a strong point. My ep will drop 4/19 please check it out!

Cream: no need to apologize brotha, your opinion counts no matter if you rap or nots I'm glad you were honest cuz you were right with what you said. Although there were a few miscues it's great that you still enjoyed it. Check the ep when it drops, there will be tracks your gonna love! 4/19

[Nick. Y]

i really like the beat, but I'm afraid the flow was not good enough and the chorus had less emotion and presence than the verses, which ain't very logical, at least according to me.. anyway, keep it movin son, hope you get better and better