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Solace - Distress Signals (Feat. SajN)

Postby Solace » Aug 28th, '11, 02:27

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[Verse 1: Solace]
I plead for change, I've been driven by stares,
I just need the oxygen but I ain't living by air,
Success is in the cup, I ain't sipped on my share,
Recently I feel the need in me to rip out my hair,
My state has gotten worse, my hate's a common curse,
And I'll joke about death until they place me off the earth,
I'm always writing, I'm in need of some sleep,
Easily beat yet I'd be without a reason to be,
If I leave instantly without pieces to read,
So my memory's alive after being deceased,
I feel that my fear's not gunna change,
And I'm here as a clear tear drops to my page,
Man I'm lost and I'm laughing with my stress wow,
And the cost of my happiness is death now,
I sit and think on this brink of destruction,
I try to put my mind to the ink like it's nothin'.

[Chorus]
I have no faith, yet society will lie to me and tell me I have every reason to,
And I hate...that I try to be the best yet do things in which I never mean to do,
I have no faith, yet society will lie to me and tell me I have every reason to,
And I hate...that I try to be the best yet do things in which I never mean to do.

[Verse 2: SajN]
The battles I fought, has troubled my years
And that I have lost, has puzzled my gears
So I gather my thoughts, with a couple of tears
Cheer out my dreams, and mumble my fears
While on a road that keeps painting the same pictures
And it keeps ‘em in making with no damn mixture
Always the same recipe, same ingredients
My life every year, yeah, SajN is living it!
Self-confidence is barely ever heard in my vocab
"Damn, I look hairy and weird with this cap
Look at that girl so pretty, it’s not to believe”
Nah, don’t fucking try SajN, she’s outta your league!
I keep that low-esteem while future is starting
I know every move I make, will end up retarded
I guess it’s time to fall back, and give up like always
Why stress with life, when no one is supportive?

[Chorus]
I have no faith, yet society will lie to me and tell me I have every reason to,
And I hate...that I try to be the best yet do things in which I never mean to do,
I have no faith, yet society will lie to me and tell me I have every reason to,
And I hate...that I try to be the best yet do things in which I never mean to do.


Edit by SajN: This is my first "offical" track since 2009.
EDIT: My feedback: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=123784
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Re: Solace - Distress Signals (Feat. SajN)

Postby DƎRDYPK » Aug 28th, '11, 02:33

damn Solace you sound like a beast you ripped it
SajN you had a nice verse but you shoulda put a lil more emotion into the delivery ;)
nice song all around though

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Postby B.A.D. » Aug 28th, '11, 02:53

Gave u a like on YT :y:

Solace goes in nice, But see man, on this your voice sounds good Again, different from Inadequate. This one is better, you dont stretch the words, and everything is pretti clear. not to mention the lyrics are dope. I'd like to see you now on different kind of song. See what other styles you can takle :y:

The hook is amazing :worship:

Sajn, man, You don't sound like you lol... this is not the kind of voice I pictured from your face hahaha, really weird. I thought you had an amazing English accent lol. But its not bad, Quality is good as and its kind of unique, but I think its very mumbly, you could try to enunciate more carefully.

Othter than that, definitively enjoyable, and I'm starting to look forward for a Solace Mixtape :y:

good Job guys.

Cover is great btw, however you should try a bit more pixel range. I always use 500x500. and make the parental advisory sticker a bit smaller. Its good tho', you know your GPX just great :y:

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Re: Solace - Distress Signals (Feat. SajN)

Postby Emadyville » Aug 28th, '11, 02:55

Basically what derky said.

Solace he energy and lyrics were there, flow was pretty on point.

Hook wasn't too bad either.

Sajn you need to put more into it so we feel what you're saying, other than that the lyrics were pretty good and flow wasnt too bad either.


good drop :y:
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Re: Solace - Distress Signals (Feat. SajN)

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 28th, '11, 03:09

Wow Solace you've really come along, your verse was pristine! Sajn your verse was nice too but the accent kind of threw it off for my personally, however the lyrics were good. I think the overall sound of the song could be louder, it seems very quiet.

Keep it up guys!
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Re: Solace - Distress Signals (Feat. SajN)

Postby Solace » Aug 28th, '11, 03:11

DƎRDYPK wrote:damn Solace you sound like a beast you ripped it
nice song all around though

Solace dropping the short and sweets with special feats :D

Thanks PK, always charming to get your feed before anyone else. :flutter:

Big Ax-D wrote:Gave u a like on YT :y:

Solace goes in nice, But see man, on this your voice sounds good Again, different from Inadequate. This one is better, you dont stretch the words, and everything is pretti clear. not to mention the lyrics are dope. I'd like to see you now on different kind of song. See what other styles you can takle :y:

The hook is amazing :worship:

Othter than that, definitively enjoyable, and I'm starting to look forward for a Solace Mixtape :y:

good Job guys.

Cover is great btw, however you should try a bit more pixel range. I always use 500x500. and make the parental advisory sticker a bit smaller. Its good tho', you know your GPX just great :y:

Sweet, I'd like a like haha. Well, I'm glad you enjoyed this more than Inadequate (though I did put so much more work in it...Doesn't matter, it just matters whether people can enjoy my tracks). Also, I'm definitely not one dimensional. These are all just little tracks I'm doing so I can practice my flow, delivery and breath control. Listen to my track "Summer" on my Solace youtube page, that was much different than anything I've posted and it was just a mess around track. I'm glad you like the hook man. Solace mixtape? I don't see myself dropping any albums/mixtapes for at least a year tbh. About the covers, yeah I used to work with 500 x 500, but I changed to 400 x 400 because if I find a picture that isn't that big, it won't look like total shit in 500 by 500. It doesn't make much of a difference though. When I do an album or something in the distant future I'll definitely use a larger resolution though. Thanks for peeping bruh! And definitely I'll return the feed. I do feel bad sometimes 'cause you check out almost everything I put out, and I never leave shit on your tracks. But there's not much to say, because I've listened to albums and tracks here and there and you don't much much criticism. You know your stuff Ax. :y: But I'll peep it soon.

Emadyville wrote:Basically what derky said.

Solace he energy and lyrics were there, flow was pretty on point.

Hook wasn't too bad either.

good drop :y:

Thanks for checking the track, glad you think it's good! :flower:

Steve Spag wrote:Wow Solace you've really come along, your verse was pristine! Sajn your verse was nice too but the accent kind of threw it off for my personally, however the lyrics were good. I think the overall sound of the song could be louder, it seems very quiet.

Keep it up guys!
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Thanks bro, means a lot. By overall sound of the song, you mean...? Is it a vocals vs instrumental issue?
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Re: Solace - Distress Signals (Feat. SajN)

Postby Alex2012 » Aug 28th, '11, 15:49

oh I really like, Solace, you're really talented, and SajN, ok I'm kidding you a bit :p you are good too, I like your voice, something touching.

and the lyrics are great. :y:
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Re: Solace - Distress Signals (Feat. SajN)

Postby Solace » Aug 28th, '11, 16:02

Someone called me talented :flutter: Thank you Alex.
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Re: Solace - Distress Signals (Feat. SajN)

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 28th, '11, 17:15

Solace wrote:
Steve Spag wrote:Wow Solace you've really come along, your verse was pristine! Sajn your verse was nice too but the accent kind of threw it off for my personally, however the lyrics were good. I think the overall sound of the song could be louder, it seems very quiet.

Keep it up guys!
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Thanks bro, means a lot. By overall sound of the song, you mean...? Is it a vocals vs instrumental issue?

No problem man. The issue isn't vocal vs. instrumental, both are at the right level they just needs to be, I don't know, louder, more full. Everything just seems a bit too low, quiet, not sure how else to say it, lol.
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Re: Solace - Distress Signals (Feat. SajN)

Postby SajN » Aug 28th, '11, 17:23

Thanks for the feed y'all :worship:
yeah, I am still struggling a bit with keeping the words clear when rapping (when talking, my english is very understandable). Working on it :y:
I thought the delivery did sound nice, but I guess not, since everyone has pointed that out. Oh well, next time :happy:


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Re: Solace - Distress Signals (Feat. SajN)

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 28th, '11, 17:30

SajN wrote:Thanks for the feed y'all :worship:
yeah, I am still struggling a bit with keeping the words clear when rapping (when talking, my english is very understandable). Working on it :y:
I thought the delivery did sound nice, but I guess not, since everyone has pointed that out. Oh well, next time :happy:


Thanks again!

Don't get down on yourself, like you said, this has been your first track since 2009. Unless you were practicing every day then you'd have no excuse, but if you weren't concentrating on your music you couldn't improve on delivery without trying. Persistence plays a major role, keep working on your pronunciation and delivery and in no time you'll be back in shape!
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Re: Solace - Distress Signals (Feat. SajN)

Postby SajN » Aug 28th, '11, 17:32

Nothing is gonna get me down :happy:

Yeah, I completely stopped rapping for two years. It was February this year that I started to write again... a little bit, and practised some recording in June.
Thanks for support :flower:

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Big Ax-D wrote:Sajn, man, You don't sound like you lol... this is not the kind of voice I pictured from your face hahaha, really weird. I thought you had an amazing English accent lol

What kinda voice did you expect? :p Actually, when I rap with a little more power in my voice, it becomes way different, lol... Don't you remember my old tracks? My english accent wasn't really perfect there
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Re: Solace - Distress Signals (Feat. SajN)

Postby Solace » Aug 28th, '11, 19:07

FreeDoom wrote:This sounds clearer than the track I just listened to, Your verse is solid and enjoyable. Not really much to comment on that, though the hook could of been a lot better if im honest. It sounds out of place and not written very well, The adlibs especially I feel. Maybe that's just a personal thing but I think it didn't feel like a hook and wasn't enjoyable.

Thanks for checking this too, I don't feel the same about the hook but then again all of my hooks are done off the top and unrehearsed. Glad you at least enjoyed the verse :y:

Steve Spag wrote:No problem man. The issue isn't vocal vs. instrumental, both are at the right level they just needs to be, I don't know, louder, more full. Everything just seems a bit too low, quiet, not sure how else to say it, lol.

Still not grasping your concept, maybe someone else could help explain? :sweating:
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Re: Solace - Distress Signals (Feat. SajN)

Postby Slimm » Aug 29th, '11, 21:44

Wow Solace you're good bro. You have a very different voice than I imagined, you sound very confident on the mic, real good bro. Hook was aight, nothing special though. A better hook could of made the song better, but the song is still dope! Sajn you improved, but like I said before you have to work on your pronunciation, liked your verse though man.
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Postby SajN » Aug 29th, '11, 21:48

Slimm wrote:Wow Solace you're good bro. You have a very different voice than I imagined, you sound very confident on the mic, real good bro. Hook was aight, nothing special though. A better hook could of made the song better, but the song is still dope! Sajn you improved, but like I said before you have to work on your pronunciation, liked your verse though man.

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